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Carolyn's Birthday

CAROLYN’S BIRTHDAY “You must believe!” she says “The evidence is clear.” says she “In that broad mysterious deep Somewhere Down there Are palaces docks pyramids a crystal All that once was fair” She looks at Earth today Warning all in her kind way to “Heed the fate of Atlantis days Love the land not the gold Save the miracles God hath bestowed” Happy birthday, dear Carolyn

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/5/2010 9:39:00 AM

Just coming to review one of those birthday poems of yours, DAver!! That is sweet of you to do birthday poems for your friends. I got two this year already!! It' s so great to have friends! Yep, I am a fiver girl, remember? I was born in '55 and now I AM 55 as of today. YIKES! LUv, Andrea

Susan Mills

Date: 7/16/2010 10:13:00 AM

What a nice poem for Carolyn's birthday, such a nice tribute to her. Thank you for commenting on my poetr., Love, Susan

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 7/14/2010 10:30:00 AM

ow what a tribute for a special lady. Lovely

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/13/2010 9:00:00 PM

You really captured that part of her, DAver, how much she cares for the environment. Very thoughtful of you. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/13/2010 6:49:00 PM

Thanks so much for remembering my birthday and weaving my interests and concerns into this beautiful poem, Daver. July 14 is Francine Roberts' Birthday as well. Join me in wishing her a happy one too! A new favorite for me! Much love, Carolyn

Date: 7/13/2010 5:28:00 PM

What a nice tribute to Carolyn to celebrate her birthday. She will love this one. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/13/2010 9:57:00 AM

lovely tribute, well done poem

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/13/2010 7:52:00 AM

yes happy birth day dear sweet Carolyn, may your heart be blessed 1000 times. Enjoyed your dedication Daver, have a wonderful and beautilful day,..p.d.