Daver Austin Poet Light Verse

Carolyn's Birthday

CAROLYN’S BIRTHDAY

“You must believe!” she says
“The evidence is clear.” says she
“In that broad mysterious deep
Somewhere
Down there
Are palaces    docks    pyramids    a crystal
All that once was fair”

She looks at Earth today
Warning all    in her kind way to
“Heed the fate of Atlantis days
Love the land    not the gold
Save the miracles God hath bestowed”

Happy birthday, dear Carolyn

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Andrea Dietrich September 5, 2010 at 9:39 AM Just coming to review one of those birthday poems of yours, DAver!! That is sweet of you to do birthday poems for your friends. I got two this year already!! It' s so great to have friends! Yep, I am a fiver girl, remember? I was born in '55 and now I AM 55 as of today. YIKES! LUv, Andrea

Susan Mills July 16, 2010 at 10:13 AM What a nice poem for Carolyn's birthday, such a nice tribute to her. Thank you for commenting on my poetr., Love, Susan

C.C Bloomsfield July 14, 2010 at 10:30 AM ow what a tribute for a special lady. Lovely

Andrea Dietrich July 13, 2010 at 9:00 PM You really captured that part of her, DAver, how much she cares for the environment. Very thoughtful of you. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire July 13, 2010 at 6:49 PM Thanks so much for remembering my birthday and weaving my interests and concerns into this beautiful poem, Daver. July 14 is Francine Roberts' Birthday as well. Join me in wishing her a happy one too! A new favorite for me! Much love, Carolyn

July 13, 2010 at 5:28 PM What a nice tribute to Carolyn to celebrate her birthday. She will love this one. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Francine Roberts July 13, 2010 at 9:57 AM lovely tribute, well done poem

Poet Destroyer A July 13, 2010 at 7:52 AM yes happy birth day dear sweet Carolyn, may your heart be blessed 1000 times. Enjoyed your dedication Daver, have a wonderful and beautilful day,..p.d.