Caroline

There are very pretty girls in North Carolina, But they’re not all named Caroline, or Charlotte Beware of confusion, a summer at the beach, Watch out for temptation, strawberry ice creams.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/24/2023 11:07:00 AM

A pleasant and enjoyable verse, Yann. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2023 11:52:00 AM

Cute little enjoyable poem!

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/2/2023 6:42:00 AM

thanks Sotto, so kind to reply, my poem was just f.un about. Carolina as a name and a state, i don't know any gril from Carolina, but i guess there are pretty girls evrywhere, appreciate your reading

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/1/2023 2:33:00 PM

Great imagery and concept, however, I'm not sure about the attractiveness of the NC girl. Are you from North Carolina?