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Carol

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The Extra For My Ordinary.......The Light For My Darkness.......The Tomorrow For My Yesterday.......The All For My Few.......The Rain For My Desert.......The Comfort For My Tears.......The Mountain For My Valley.......

 

 

                          She Is

She's the artist at the canvas Where the depth jumps out and dances She's the aurora burning through my skeptic sky There's a glow on the water A journey is upon her She has passage to the oft denied My heart ! My heart ! Protected by copyright All rights reserved

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Susan Ashley
Date: 11/15/2017 8:30:00 PM
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Ohh your poem is so beautifully and lovingly expressed Chuck! Your last two lines are an amazing ending for this romantic poem. Line three in the first stanza is damn amazing as well! Excellent and enjoyed!
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 11/17/2017 5:52:00 AM
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Thank you Susan! Your words lifted my spirit!
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Maria Williams
Date: 11/2/2017 6:12:00 AM
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Oh what a romantic write Chuck.. Lucky Carol. Captivating...Maria
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 11/17/2017 5:48:00 AM
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Thank you, Maria! Your words.....So appreciated!
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 11/1/2017 7:53:00 AM
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Thanks Jan, your comment is loved! My best to you, chuck
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 11/1/2017 8:28:00 AM
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Chuck you should learn how to reply to a comment! Get your act together! Sincerely, Your muse!
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2017 6:45:00 PM
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She is one heck of a lucky lady to have such an awesome tribute written for her!!! a little gem of a poem Chuck:-) hugs Jan xx
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 11/1/2017 8:26:00 AM
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Thanks, Jan! Your comment is loved!!
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Becca Teagan
Date: 10/28/2017 1:33:00 AM
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this is awesome! so sweet!!! Hi Chuck... so good to see you again.
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 10/28/2017 10:19:00 AM
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Hey Becca! TY for those sweet words! and....Becca's d bestest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2017 10:57:00 AM
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Oh, so pretty! What love brings!
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 10/23/2017 5:32:00 PM
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Thanks so much, Kim!
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Thvia Shetley
Date: 10/12/2017 10:05:00 PM
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She must be very special to have been granted such passage. Lovely pice xx
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 10/22/2017 8:03:00 AM
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Thanks Thvia, Your work inspires me. Chuck

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