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The Extra For My Ordinary.......The Light For My Darkness.......The Tomorrow For My Yesterday.......The All For My Few.......The Rain For My Desert.......The Comfort For My Tears.......The Mountain For My Valley.......

 

 

                          She Is

Carol

She's the artist at the canvas
Where the depth jumps out and dances
She's the aurora burning through my skeptic sky

There's a glow on the water
A journey is upon her
She has passage to the oft denied

My heart !  My heart !




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Ashley Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 8:30 PM
Ohh your poem is so beautifully and lovingly expressed Chuck! Your last two lines are an amazing ending for this romantic poem. Line three in the first stanza is damn amazing as well! Excellent and enjoyed!
Melugin Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 5:52 AM
Thank you Susan! Your words lifted my spirit!
Williams Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 6:12 AM
Oh what a romantic write Chuck.. Lucky Carol. Captivating...Maria
Melugin Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 5:48 AM
Thank you, Maria! Your words.....So appreciated!
Melugin Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 7:53 AM
Thanks Jan, your comment is loved! My best to you, chuck
Melugin Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 8:28 AM
Chuck you should learn how to reply to a comment! Get your act together! Sincerely, Your muse!
Allison Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 6:45 PM
She is one heck of a lucky lady to have such an awesome tribute written for her!!! a little gem of a poem Chuck:-) hugs Jan xx
Melugin Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 8:26 AM
Thanks, Jan! Your comment is loved!!
Teagan Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 1:33 AM
this is awesome! so sweet!!! Hi Chuck... so good to see you again.
Melugin Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 10:19 AM
Hey Becca! TY for those sweet words! and....Becca's d bestest!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 10:57 AM
Oh, so pretty! What love brings!
Melugin Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 5:32 PM
Thanks so much, Kim!
Shetley Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 10:05 PM
She must be very special to have been granted such passage. Lovely pice xx
Melugin Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 8:03 AM
Thanks Thvia, Your work inspires me. Chuck
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