Carol

the news i got last week
has caused alot of strife
they tell me that my sister
is going to lose her life

as she lays in bed
feeling alot of pain
wishing she were well
but never to be again

as i look at her 
just her formal shell
its a life that was so good
but now you cannot tell
how can i say goodbye
to one who was so stong
i cant help but feel anger
because it just feels so wrong
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 18, 2010 at 4:18 PM
A very sad poem, very painful to feel like that. Welldone on the write,..p.d.
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September 18, 2010 at 3:01 PM
so sorry about this sadness ..beautiful..Take care~Deb
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