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Carnivorous Wolfman

You carnivorous beast Do not approach me I must love But the other form You eat so wrong Both hands Into the mouth it goes Rare meat Painful to watch As whomever it was Horrifies me Please just go away I’ll catch you on the return I’ll await your transformation To normal life But is it really normal Is it worth these changes Knowing it’ll always Be this way Please don’t approach me I love you I know you love me too Don’t come near me Till you change back I’ll wait… Russell Sivey Entrant into Matt's "Wolfman Falls in Love" contest

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/7/2011 10:42:00 PM

this is a movie material.. whoot, russel... soup mail! :)

Don Johnson

Date: 10/7/2011 6:34:00 PM

the wolfy wolfman munching on, bloody disgusting Russells song, good twist on the tail mate ....Don

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/7/2011 1:52:00 PM

The concept for this contest perplexed me, Russell, but I must say I love your approach to it. (LOL After "change back," you could have added "Jack" as Jack Nicholson is one of many who played a wolfman.) Hope you take the top spot with your entry! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/7/2011 9:36:00 AM

Reads like a winner..Maybe he'll change back and be permanently okay..Good luck in the contest.Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work about the fall...Sara

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/7/2011 2:27:00 AM

Oh, you wrote from a different angle! The patient woman, eh? Well, if I were her, I'd put my Nike's on and start sprinting! I was gonna write about a Werewolf at breakfast for humor but I needed to mix it up a bit. Thanks for honoring me by reading my latest works. You always give insightful advice or comments. Every once in a while go even deeper in your analysis....u will grow even more from it. I do this by reading Nette's and Chris A's thrillers...yours and many more. Get some sleep...zzzzzz