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Carnivorous Wolfman

You carnivorous beast
Do not approach me
I must love
But the other form
You eat so wrong
Both hands
Into the mouth it goes
Rare meat
Painful to watch
As whomever it was
Horrifies me
Please just go away
I’ll catch you on the return
I’ll await your transformation
To normal life
But is it really normal
Is it worth these changes
Knowing it’ll always
Be this way
Please don’t approach me
I love you
I know you love me too
Don’t come near me
Till you change back
I’ll wait…

Russell Sivey

Entrant into Matt's "Wolfman Falls in Love" contest

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/7/2011 10:42:00 PM

this is a movie material.. whoot, russel... soup mail! :)

Don Johnson

Date: 10/7/2011 6:34:00 PM

the wolfy wolfman munching on, bloody disgusting Russells song, good twist on the tail mate ....Don

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/7/2011 1:52:00 PM

The concept for this contest perplexed me, Russell, but I must say I love your approach to it. (LOL After "change back," you could have added "Jack" as Jack Nicholson is one of many who played a wolfman.) Hope you take the top spot with your entry! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/7/2011 9:36:00 AM

Reads like a winner..Maybe he'll change back and be permanently okay..Good luck in the contest.Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work about the fall...Sara

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/7/2011 2:27:00 AM

Oh, you wrote from a different angle! The patient woman, eh? Well, if I were her, I'd put my Nike's on and start sprinting! I was gonna write about a Werewolf at breakfast for humor but I needed to mix it up a bit. Thanks for honoring me by reading my latest works. You always give insightful advice or comments. Every once in a while go even deeper in your analysis....u will grow even more from it. I do this by reading Nette's and Chris A's thrillers...yours and many more. Get some sleep...zzzzzz