M. L. Kiser Poet Sijo

Carnivore Descends

Burning eyes in the darkest night; sear through the moonlights rays.
In the distance, a mournful howling; cracks the air, in two.
Transformation complete; the quickening carnivore descends!

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Suzanne C. Goudreau November 13, 2014 at 8:08 PM Wow! Powerful read! Beautifully penned. It fills the air with action! M. L. Kiser November 18, 2014 at 6:12 PM Wow! Thank you so much.

Sara Kendrick November 10, 2014 at 3:41 PM Very scary work..I wonder what kind of animal this might be?..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara M. L. Kiser November 18, 2014 at 6:13 PM It's open to interpretation...intentionally. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Debra Squyres November 9, 2014 at 12:38 PM It has it all... atmosphere, life, death, and suspense. Very good !! M. L. Kiser November 18, 2014 at 6:13 PM Thank you so much.

Carol Eastman November 5, 2014 at 11:37 AM I like how you never said exzactly what type of carnivore it is... It lft the imagination and mid racing to whatever we want to fit. M. L. Kiser November 8, 2014 at 1:39 PM It was intentional. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Andrea Dietrich October 30, 2014 at 9:28 PM This kind of made me think of a werewolf or something!!! Awesome. M. L. Kiser November 8, 2014 at 1:40 PM Ah, a good one! Glad you stopped by to read and comment.

James Fraser October 30, 2014 at 4:00 PM Reading is like viewing a nature program on Predators, nice one, James :)

Maurice Yvonne October 29, 2014 at 6:42 PM Yeah this is good, I can read Sijo's like this one all day.