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Carnivore Descends

Burning eyes in the darkest night; sear through the moonlights rays. In the distance, a mournful howling; cracks the air, in two. Transformation complete; the quickening carnivore descends!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Suzanne C. Goudreau
Date: 11/13/2014 8:08:00 PM
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Wow! Powerful read! Beautifully penned. It fills the air with action!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/18/2014 6:12:00 PM
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Wow! Thank you so much.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/10/2014 3:41:00 PM
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Very scary work..I wonder what kind of animal this might be?..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/18/2014 6:13:00 PM
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It's open to interpretation...intentionally. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Debra Squyres
Date: 11/9/2014 12:38:00 PM
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It has it all... atmosphere, life, death, and suspense. Very good !!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/18/2014 6:13:00 PM
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Thank you so much.
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Carol Eastman
Date: 11/5/2014 11:37:00 AM
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I like how you never said exzactly what type of carnivore it is... It lft the imagination and mid racing to whatever we want to fit.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/8/2014 1:39:00 PM
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It was intentional. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/30/2014 9:28:00 PM
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This kind of made me think of a werewolf or something!!! Awesome.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/8/2014 1:40:00 PM
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Ah, a good one! Glad you stopped by to read and comment.
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James Fraser
Date: 10/30/2014 4:00:00 PM
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Reading is like viewing a nature program on Predators, nice one, James :)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/29/2014 6:42:00 PM
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Yeah this is good, I can read Sijo's like this one all day.
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