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Carnival of Us

spin and twirl tilt-a-whirl falling fast through the sky I'm just along for the ride, he says while I hold on tight and shut my eyes he talks of magic and trust it's the carnival of us brights lights flashing past and with a nervous laugh I wait to crash

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Date: 6/3/2020 4:49:00 PM
Hi Robin-very imaginative poem, I like the sudden ending.. welcome to the soup
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