Carnival of Us

spin and twirl tilt-a-whirl falling fast through the sky I'm just along for the ride, he says while I hold on tight and shut my eyes he talks of magic and trust it's the carnival of us brights lights flashing past and with a nervous laugh I wait to crash
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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June 3, 2020 at 4:49 PM
Hi Robin-very imaginative poem, I like the sudden ending.. welcome to the soup
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