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Carnival For the Lost Soul

Piqued my soul
Carnival playing
Visiting
Honor hold
Wishing for happiness free
Piercing heart

Playing card
Proving other death
Falling down
Seeing more
Taken it all for granted
Hurting heart

Russell Sivey
Entrant into Nette Onclauds contest ~Share a Shadorma~

Copyright © Russell Sivey | Year Posted 2011

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Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 8/5/2014 4:46:00 AM misspelled Russell oops! the money signs were on purpose, the lack of L at the end was indeed an accident! PLUS 7 RATE! Login to Reply

Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 8/5/2014 4:44:00 AM just rereading my short list of favorite poems this morning and want to remind you how awesome this piece is Ru$$eL! Login to Reply

Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 11/11/2011 3:27:00 PM this one's got stYle...7rate and to my faves Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 8/23/2011 10:28:00 PM Congrats on your win Russel, I enjoyed your write Rus. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/23/2011 9:53:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Russell. I love that opening line, piqued my soul! Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 8/23/2011 2:02:00 PM Congratulations Russel on your win...wonderful approach here. Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 8/23/2011 12:18:00 PM I haven't been on Soup for a day or so and have just seen all the contest results I've missed! Please excuse this quick message of congratulations - well done on all your wins : ) Login to Reply

Caryl Ramsdale Date: 8/23/2011 11:49:00 AM Congratulations on your winning placement in nette's Shadorma contest. Caryl Ramsdale Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/23/2011 10:11:00 AM Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Share A Shadorma" contest Russell. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/23/2011 9:22:00 AM Congrats Russell on your fabulous fifth place win with this elegant entry on carnival.. awesome one..luv.. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/23/2011 9:14:00 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Russell Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 8/23/2011 4:06:00 AM hey Russell, congrats on your win, David Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/16/2011 10:57:00 AM I am so thrilled by the poetry I am reading this morning. Looks like everyone has found a pipeline to inspiration. This is wonderful and I am so happy your poetry is right here in this mix Russell. Thank you so much for sharing. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 8/15/2011 10:53:00 PM Very well done my friend. Should be a winner. God Bless, JB Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/15/2011 10:02:00 PM Unique to write on carnival, Russell Login to Reply

Troy Gamble Date: 8/15/2011 8:16:00 PM what did you mean by piqued my soul. that is an amazing expression. i loved your poem Login to Reply