Russell Sivey Poet Shadorma

Carnival For the Lost Soul

Piqued my soul
Carnival playing
Visiting
Honor hold
Wishing for happiness free
Piercing heart

Playing card
Proving other death
Falling down
Seeing more
Taken it all for granted
Hurting heart

Russell Sivey
Entrant into Nette Onclauds contest ~Share a Shadorma~

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Jslambert Mister Roboto August 5, 2014 at 4:46 AM misspelled Russell oops! the money signs were on purpose, the lack of L at the end was indeed an accident! PLUS 7 RATE!

Jslambert Mister Roboto August 5, 2014 at 4:44 AM just rereading my short list of favorite poems this morning and want to remind you how awesome this piece is Ru$$eL!

Jslambert Mister Roboto November 11, 2011 at 3:27 PM this one's got stYle...7rate and to my faves

John Freeman August 23, 2011 at 10:28 PM Congrats on your win Russel, I enjoyed your write Rus. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich August 23, 2011 at 9:53 PM Congratulations on your win, Russell. I love that opening line, piqued my soul!

Kash Poet August 23, 2011 at 2:02 PM Congratulations Russel on your win...wonderful approach here.

Jack Horne August 23, 2011 at 12:18 PM I haven't been on Soup for a day or so and have just seen all the contest results I've missed! Please excuse this quick message of congratulations - well done on all your wins : )

Caryl Ramsdale August 23, 2011 at 11:49 AM Congratulations on your winning placement in nette's Shadorma contest. Caryl Ramsdale

Carol Sunshine Brown August 23, 2011 at 10:11 AM Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Share A Shadorma" contest Russell. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 23, 2011 at 9:22 AM Congrats Russell on your fabulous fifth place win with this elegant entry on carnival.. awesome one..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta August 23, 2011 at 9:14 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Russell

David Williams August 23, 2011 at 4:06 AM hey Russell, congrats on your win, David

Carol Sunshine Brown August 16, 2011 at 10:57 AM I am so thrilled by the poetry I am reading this morning. Looks like everyone has found a pipeline to inspiration. This is wonderful and I am so happy your poetry is right here in this mix Russell. Thank you so much for sharing. Love, Carol

Judy Ball August 15, 2011 at 10:53 PM Very well done my friend. Should be a winner. God Bless, JB

Dr.Ram Mehta August 15, 2011 at 10:02 PM Unique to write on carnival, Russell

Troy Gamble August 15, 2011 at 8:16 PM what did you mean by piqued my soul. that is an amazing expression. i loved your poem