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With a slight glow of early morning sunlight a single flower-bud unfolds bright from its green protective wrap to serrated knap revealing soft pink appealing velvet petals of a carnation, Mother's Love with a fresh spicy clove-like perfume coursing through benignly and at last, consume
6/30/2019 Poetry Contest: Writing Challenge 2, June 2019- A Summer Flower Sponsored by: Dear Heart

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Date: 7/17/2019 3:11:00 PM
Lovely write! Congratulations on your win!! -Smita
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Date: 7/11/2019 8:34:00 PM
Eve congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem ~
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Date: 7/10/2019 9:51:00 PM
Congratulations Eve. This is so lovely. Gives new appreciation for the Carnation.
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Date: 7/9/2019 11:49:00 AM
a beautiful poem about my favourite cut flower, many congrats Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/8/2019 2:54:00 PM
Very pretty Eve. Congrats.
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Date: 7/7/2019 5:18:00 PM
Eve, Beautifully written! David
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Date: 7/4/2019 8:09:00 AM
Eve you describe it so well! Simply beautiful!;)
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Date: 7/3/2019 4:20:00 PM
Like the way you wrote this...from birth to fulfillment...
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Date: 7/2/2019 9:55:00 AM
This is so lovely and the way you centered it , that makes it look like etheree or another type of poetry yet it's not. I think Dear Heart will love this!
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Date: 7/1/2019 5:09:00 PM
A sweet read Eve! The scent of Beauty dispersed in a poetic flair! Glad to read your poetry again.. Blessings.
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Date: 7/1/2019 10:26:00 AM
Lovely flower you have written about Eve, good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 7/1/2019 7:18:00 AM
Beautiful like the flower it depicts..all the best, Eve.
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Date: 7/1/2019 5:51:00 AM
Love this write! A fave! My mother loves carnations!
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Date: 7/1/2019 12:16:00 AM
A gorgeous entry for the contest Eve. I love the scent of Carnations and that they last a very long time when made into a lei! I am sure to see this near the top my friend! : ) xxoo
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