Kp Nunez Poet Acrostic

Carmen

Can a child ever forget, how deep a mother’s love abides

All those days since birth, till now I’m grown she guides

Remembering her smile, so tender, so warm as her embrace

More than soothes away my pain, my fear of failure and disgrace

Even in my dreams she comforts, her voice, her scent would stay

Never will her being mother stop, till when I’m old and gray.





26 March 2015
Contest : Acrostic on Mother's Day - 1st Place
Sponsor : TAMMY REAMS

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Afolabi Muideen November 4, 2015 at 11:58 PM yes KIM, mother hold a special place in our heart..... "Never will her being mother stop till when I'm old and grey" this line is extreme great KIM, the role of mother is incomparable. Beautiful, excellent, great, brilliant, phenomena, fascinating, etc. write if there is chance to Fav this twice I'd like to lol!. Congratulations on your win ...............A.M.

Aiyah Torres April 25, 2015 at 10:52 AM wow! congrats on your win.. this is so amazing!!! :)) it touches my heart so deeply .. :) gratitude to you,^_^

Tammy Reams April 12, 2015 at 9:29 AM Sorry I'm late on this Kim. Congrats on your win. Thank you for entering my contest.

Bl Devnath April 10, 2015 at 12:05 PM Congrats my lovely friend for your superb win. It's my favorite poem too. Loved always,bl

Sasha Maharaj April 10, 2015 at 6:18 AM Stunning Poem Kim. Congrats :)

Sara Kendrick April 6, 2015 at 5:21 PM Great winning work honoring your mother..Congrats..Sara

Constance La France April 6, 2015 at 3:00 PM Kim, congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest

Sandra Haight April 6, 2015 at 11:16 AM Congratulations on your nice win, Kim. Such beautiful feelings expressed in your words about your mother. Sandra

Joseph May April 5, 2015 at 9:28 PM Beautiful tribute Kim...Congrats on your win

Andrea Dietrich April 5, 2015 at 9:11 PM Congrats on your very well deserved win, dear.

Eve Roper April 5, 2015 at 8:51 PM Memories of mom are unforgettable. Congratulations on your win a 7. Blessings Eve

Paul Schneiter April 5, 2015 at 5:16 PM There is nothing on earth as powerful as maternal love, and you have expressed it eloquently within the demands of an acrostic format. Superbly done, Kim!

Jan Allison April 5, 2015 at 1:39 PM a wonderful acrostic congrats on your top spot:-) hugs jan xx

Rob Carmack April 5, 2015 at 11:14 AM Kim, congrats on taking a top spot.

Cona Adams April 1, 2015 at 8:19 AM Yes, a good mother is a priceless gift, one which keeps influencing even after death. My mother lived to 93, and lived nearby. I was able to enjoy her company well into my seventies. A very nice Acrostic, Kim.

Andrea Dietrich March 31, 2015 at 6:05 PM And even beyond the years you are old and gray, she will be looking down from heaven loving you. This is perfect, Kim. And I love how you rhymed it

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 29, 2015 at 2:39 PM Kim, this is beautiful, and a lovely expression of the lasting love of a mother! Hugs, Rhonda

Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2015 at 12:15 PM - So beautiful love to your mother - A mother deserves all the best! - I wish you best of luck in the contest, Kim - (In Norway we have Mother's Day in February, my mother died four years ago - miss her every day) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Peranteau March 29, 2015 at 9:26 AM Very nice dedication Kim ! A wonderful Acrostic for sure dear poet ! Have a wonderful week......much love, james

Njeri Hunjeri March 29, 2015 at 3:06 AM Kim, very beautiful tribute to your mum. #7. And all the best in the contest.

Ralph Sergi March 28, 2015 at 8:40 AM Hi Kim: Beautifully done. Your poem reminds me of my italian mama. Kp Nunez March 28, 2015 at 2:11 PM Thank you, Ralph. Your mom must be lovely, caring and a great cook too. I can still remember the unique and delicious scent that always somehow would come from her clothes. Appreciate much your visit and comment.

Constance La France March 28, 2015 at 7:15 AM Kim, this a beautiful tribute to your mother, so well written and full of deep emotion, a perfect 7 rating, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, entwined . . .

Emile Pinet March 27, 2015 at 1:56 PM You have stored all the best your mother gave to you in your heart so that you may dispense it to others, so they too can be touched by the experience. The love that you hold for your mother is remarkable and so self evident in this poem. Emile. #7

William J. Jr. Atfield March 27, 2015 at 11:00 AM Good morning Kim : “ Thank you, sire, for your visit ”, you are most welcome my Dear, and sorry Kim, that I get to deep into “ and sharing your thoughts.” I have seen that you have mind a couple of more gems from the subconscious lands of history. Keep up the good work !!! “ I wish you a lovely day. Hugs! Kim :) ”And may the same be for you !!! Best wishes, big hugs and kisses !!! Bill .

Lei Strauss March 27, 2015 at 7:19 AM This is so much inspiring Kim! Hey! I have read your Soupmail! Thanks Kim! I appreciate it! :) Kp Nunez March 27, 2015 at 8:05 AM Thank you, Lei, for your visit and comment. You are very much welcome, Lei. That's what a kababayan is for...Just keep coming out with those writes. Enjoy a cup of Soup a day! Hugs and smiles. Kim :)

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