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Carmen

Can a child ever forget, how deep a mother’s love abides

All those days since birth, till now I’m grown she guides

Remembering her smile, so tender, so warm as her embrace

More than soothes away my pain, my fear of failure and disgrace

Even in my dreams she comforts, her voice, her scent would stay

Never will her being mother stop, till when I’m old and gray.





26 March 2015
Contest : Acrostic on Mother's Day - 1st Place
Sponsor : TAMMY REAMS

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Afolabi Muideen Date: 11/4/2015 11:58:00 PM yes KIM, mother hold a special place in our heart..... "Never will her being mother stop till when I'm old and grey" this line is extreme great KIM, the role of mother is incomparable. Beautiful, excellent, great, brilliant, phenomena, fascinating, etc. write if there is chance to Fav this twice I'd like to lol!. Congratulations on your win ...............A.M. Login to Reply

Aiyah Torres Date: 4/25/2015 10:52:00 AM wow! congrats on your win.. this is so amazing!!! :)) it touches my heart so deeply .. :) gratitude to you,^_^ Login to Reply

Tammy Reams Date: 4/12/2015 9:29:00 AM Sorry I'm late on this Kim. Congrats on your win. Thank you for entering my contest. Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 4/10/2015 12:05:00 PM Congrats my lovely friend for your superb win. It's my favorite poem too. Loved always,bl Login to Reply

Sasha Maharaj Date: 4/10/2015 6:18:00 AM Stunning Poem Kim. Congrats :) Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/6/2015 5:21:00 PM Great winning work honoring your mother..Congrats..Sara Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 4/6/2015 3:00:00 PM Kim, congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 4/6/2015 11:16:00 AM Congratulations on your nice win, Kim. Such beautiful feelings expressed in your words about your mother. Sandra Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 4/5/2015 9:28:00 PM Beautiful tribute Kim...Congrats on your win Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/5/2015 9:11:00 PM Congrats on your very well deserved win, dear. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 4/5/2015 8:51:00 PM Memories of mom are unforgettable. Congratulations on your win a 7. Blessings Eve Login to Reply

Paul Schneiter Date: 4/5/2015 5:16:00 PM There is nothing on earth as powerful as maternal love, and you have expressed it eloquently within the demands of an acrostic format. Superbly done, Kim! Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 4/5/2015 1:39:00 PM a wonderful acrostic congrats on your top spot:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Rob Carmack Date: 4/5/2015 11:14:00 AM Kim, congrats on taking a top spot. Login to Reply

Cona Adams Date: 4/1/2015 8:19:00 AM Yes, a good mother is a priceless gift, one which keeps influencing even after death. My mother lived to 93, and lived nearby. I was able to enjoy her company well into my seventies. A very nice Acrostic, Kim. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/31/2015 6:05:00 PM And even beyond the years you are old and gray, she will be looking down from heaven loving you. This is perfect, Kim. And I love how you rhymed it Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 3/29/2015 2:39:00 PM Kim, this is beautiful, and a lovely expression of the lasting love of a mother! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/29/2015 12:15:00 PM - So beautiful love to your mother - A mother deserves all the best! - I wish you best of luck in the contest, Kim - (In Norway we have Mother's Day in February, my mother died four years ago - miss her every day) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 3/29/2015 9:26:00 AM Very nice dedication Kim ! A wonderful Acrostic for sure dear poet ! Have a wonderful week......much love, james Login to Reply

Njeri Hunjeri Date: 3/29/2015 3:06:00 AM Kim, very beautiful tribute to your mum. #7. And all the best in the contest. Login to Reply

Ralph Sergi Date: 3/28/2015 8:40:00 AM Hi Kim: Beautifully done. Your poem reminds me of my italian mama. Login to Reply Kp Nunez Date: 3/28/2015 2:11:00 PM Thank you, Ralph. Your mom must be lovely, caring and a great cook too. I can still remember the unique and delicious scent that always somehow would come from her clothes. Appreciate much your visit and comment.

Constance La France Date: 3/28/2015 7:15:00 AM Kim, this a beautiful tribute to your mother, so well written and full of deep emotion, a perfect 7 rating, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, entwined . . . Login to Reply

Emile Pinet Date: 3/27/2015 1:56:00 PM You have stored all the best your mother gave to you in your heart so that you may dispense it to others, so they too can be touched by the experience. The love that you hold for your mother is remarkable and so self evident in this poem. Emile. #7 Login to Reply

William J. Jr. Atfield Date: 3/27/2015 11:00:00 AM Good morning Kim : “ Thank you, sire, for your visit ”, you are most welcome my Dear, and sorry Kim, that I get to deep into “ and sharing your thoughts.” I have seen that you have mind a couple of more gems from the subconscious lands of history. Keep up the good work !!! “ I wish you a lovely day. Hugs! Kim :) ”And may the same be for you !!! Best wishes, big hugs and kisses !!! Bill . Login to Reply

Lei Strauss Date: 3/27/2015 7:19:00 AM This is so much inspiring Kim! Hey! I have read your Soupmail! Thanks Kim! I appreciate it! :) Login to Reply Kp Nunez Date: 3/27/2015 8:05:00 AM Thank you, Lei, for your visit and comment. You are very much welcome, Lei. That's what a kababayan is for...Just keep coming out with those writes. Enjoy a cup of Soup a day! Hugs and smiles. Kim :)

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