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To admire other people's flowers

and not nurture your own

what's up with that.

Caring Hands

On our lawn I stand
Admiring three Islands
Perennials returned
Your harsh words they've outgrown
How would YOUR garden grow?

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 5/9/2015 3:42:00 AM
There's another garden here that needs care and attention. Lost some perennials over winter. I love Tanka and Haiku, so few words that say so much. Delice
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Iris E. Sankey- Lewis
Date: 5/10/2015 6:46:00 PM
You have no idea; I've been accused of caring too much for our lawn and yard and home. Thank you for stopping by... Blessings to you.
Date: 5/8/2015 2:03:00 PM
- My garden needs caring hands and love - Thank you for the lovely poem, Iris - Wish you a happy weekend ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Iris E. Sankey- Lewis
Date: 5/10/2015 6:48:00 PM
We have caring hands and love. We must activate. Don't wait. Tomorrow is not guaranteed to any of us; we want our flowers while... Blessings. Thanks for visiting.
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