Caring
it was all so sudden,
that he got hurt,
she had not even time enough,
to ponder how hurt affected them,
they drifted apart,
like twigs aflow in a stream,
suddenly a gust of realisation,
brought them together,
that flow aimlessly they must,
why not together taking care.
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