Jenni Kalicharan Poet Choka

-caribbean Flavor-

Caribbean Flavor.

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Cool Caribbean breeze
Softly whispering your name
Intoxicating.

West Indies waters
Cooling my heated body
Invigorating.

Tall coconut trees
Towering over the sea
Intimidating.

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Pandita Sietesantos July 27, 2017 at 1:24 PM Awww! This is so very beautiful! It makes me feel nostalgic for the Caribbean which I love so much! The imagery is awesome, my friend! All the best. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich September 17, 2016 at 8:09 PM Yes, I envision and I feel the flavor of the Caribbean. I was able to take a cruise of the Bahamas a long time ago. Those were wonderful days. Never to return. This made me think of that. Jenni Kalicharan September 17, 2016 at 10:03 PM I am glad you've had a taste of the Caribbean. It really is a lovely place to live. Happy that my poem brought back good memories for you.. Thanks again... Jenni

Paul Callus September 17, 2016 at 3:40 PM Considering this is your first Choka I must compliment you on this lovely poem, Jenni. I have always wanted to visit the Caribbean, and you tempt me even more with your words' flavour. (pls chk syllable count line 1) ~ Regards // paul Jenni Kalicharan September 17, 2016 at 10:00 PM Hi Paul, thank you so very much for your generous compliment! Thanks also for pointing out my mistake in the count of the first line. I looked it up and realised you are correct. Thanks again. Jenni

Probir Gupta September 17, 2016 at 6:37 AM And the three Choka stanzas enthralling all of us ... Jenni Kalicharan September 17, 2016 at 2:23 PM Thank you, Kind Sir.

Jan Allison September 17, 2016 at 3:23 AM oh such beautiful imagery Jenni you are a very accomplished writer:-) hugs jan xx Jenni Kalicharan September 17, 2016 at 2:26 PM Wow!! I've never been referred to as an 'accomplished writer'. Thank you for your kind and encouraging words. Before yesterday I had never heard the word "Choka" in relation to poetry.