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Caribbean Beauty With a Pacific Flare

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This is an ode about Colombia. It is the only country in its continent with coastlines on both the pacific ocean and the Caribbean sea (lines 1 & 2). It is a mega diverse country- highest amount of species by area in the world, most endemic species of butterflies, most orchid species, most amphibian species and more species of birds than all of Europe + North America combined (lines 3 & 5). The dry law during major events such as world cup matches and elections; serves to prohibit alcohol consumption in order to stern public violence (line 6). It is the world’s leading source of Emeralds (line 7). Medellin is a city which was a onetime murder capital of the world but has undergone renaissance to be the country’s main cultural hub (line 8). Its people are so pre-occupied with curves that even store mannequins have enormous breasts and women are obsessed with cosmetic surgery (lines 9 & 10). Street hawking of hard core porn is popular (line 11) and its name is derived from Christopher Columbus (line 13).

A beautiful bird with two feathers; one in the Caribbean sea and the other in the pacific waters. Its awesome hand pets the back of animal existence as its stomach stays suitably soft to the dwelling of butterflies, orchid lineage and Amphibians. Unique in a self protecting strategy of its dry law, the trunk of Emeralds stay strongest in its domain. The Medellin transition of a murder capital to a cultural hub; cosmetic obsession and a craze for physical attraction well amplified by the artistic show of mannequins, speak out for this region so sex friendly and well identified by one of the most historic explorers the world has ever known.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/17/2015 7:57:00 AM
Interesting work..A country of diverse animal, plant and people..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 1/28/2016 10:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara

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