Caressed By Your Fervor

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In these uncertain times when hours pale Your ever-present flame exudes lit charm; That evenings assuage all fears unseen And knowing you would guide us through day’s rain, Warm caresses gift quietude, kind As fervor vanquishes the dimmest star. You are my comfort through night's embrace The keeper who assures our dreams cruise on, Rivering the shores glazed by tomorrows : For my harbor is you… my sanctum divine This altar of refuge when breaths heave low; This flash of eyes glinting as kisses wake dawn … Until your touch lullabies me, so safe so abiding. Writers on the Storm Contest 7/8/2018 Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke Inspiration from The Doors' Song 'Touch Me'

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Date: 5/24/2019 2:02:00 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. Love.
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Date: 5/24/2019 1:42:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! So inspiring, and spiritual. Ang ganda! ang galing! God bless you.
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Date: 5/23/2019 11:05:00 AM
Such beautiful poetry, Nette! Great title w/gorgeous lines ... This altar of refuge when breaths heave low; This flash of eyes glinting as kisses wake dawn. Your love lightening pen flashes golden ink. Love and hugs always.
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Date: 5/21/2019 9:03:00 PM
A poem of stirring beauty that touches the heart and soul purely, tenderly and deeply. Your romanticism is ever enchanting, Nette, and your artistry ever exquisite. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/21/2019 7:09:00 PM
Loving tribute...nice!
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Date: 5/21/2019 11:09:00 AM
Commendable muse that delicately enlightens the amorous soul nette, best wishes indeed, Aloha wk
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Date: 5/21/2019 7:27:00 AM
WoW! Such a deeply touching piece. So romantic. Loved every word. Well Done Nette. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/20/2019 3:00:00 PM
Well written nette, full of romance and passion. Good luck Tom. P.S. Safe travels
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Date: 5/20/2019 2:58:00 PM
Caressed by love and romance..and so much more..a very artistic write, Nette..much enjoyed the read.
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Date: 5/20/2019 2:54:00 PM
Super write Nette showing great use of descriptive words that move the very soul of the reader.
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Date: 5/20/2019 2:41:00 PM
This is a sure win, I can taste it, feel it and we will see it! Well penned my friend with true talent! Hugs, Jenns.
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