Caress of Waves

With a gentle lap, Waves caress sandy gold shores; Retreating for more. http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature3.php

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Sabrina Huggins

Date: 7/20/2009 8:13:00 PM

Are you a painter also? When you write its such a crystal clear picture....Sabrina

Charlene Bird

Date: 7/15/2009 9:45:00 AM

Lovely images here that you painted with your pen James, great work!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/14/2009 1:55:00 PM

Love the Haiku. I guess you would know about the waves living on a mass of land surrounded by water. Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/14/2009 1:53:00 PM

Sounds like a love affair of the ocean with the shore! Lovely ~ Carrie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/14/2009 1:45:00 PM

Sounds like a trip to Ormond Beach is due for you, James! Thank you for your birthday greetings today. I am still out of town, but I have a new laptop I am trying to learn to use. The wireless mouse is not working. More when I return home. I've missed out emails! Love, Carolyn

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/14/2009 1:27:00 PM

ooohhh!! line 3-so cooly brings it together into this dreamy personification of the water's relationship w/the shore!! how fun is that!! very original! James!!!!