Caress of Waves

With a gentle lap,
Waves caress sandy gold shores;
Retreating for more.


http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature3.php
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Huggins Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 8:13 PM
Are you a painter also? When you write its such a crystal clear picture....Sabrina
Bird Avatar
July 15, 2009 at 9:45 AM
Lovely images here that you painted with your pen James, great work!!
Kendrick Avatar
July 14, 2009 at 1:55 PM
Love the Haiku. I guess you would know about the waves living on a mass of land surrounded by water. Sara
Richards Avatar
July 14, 2009 at 1:53 PM
Sounds like a love affair of the ocean with the shore! Lovely ~ Carrie
Devonshire Avatar
July 14, 2009 at 1:45 PM
Sounds like a trip to Ormond Beach is due for you, James! Thank you for your birthday greetings today. I am still out of town, but I have a new laptop I am trying to learn to use. The wireless mouse is not working. More when I return home. I've missed out emails! Love, Carolyn
Goff Avatar
July 14, 2009 at 1:27 PM
ooohhh!! line 3-so cooly brings it together into this dreamy personification of the water's relationship w/the shore!! how fun is that!! very original! James!!!!
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