David Kavanagh Poet Monoku

Caren the Mclaren

no lay about souped up speed ~ 
                                    omnipresent in a different league 


Tease a Friend Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Bobby May
22/01/21 (17) syllables

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John Watt February 8, 2021 at 8:37 AM David, I agree, Caren is in a different league. I love the imagery of a McLaren to represent her amazingly prolific writing of both poetry and friendly comments. Well done on your #1 ~ John David Kavanagh February 8, 2021 at 8:42 AM Thanks John, I had this speed machine in mind, but then style and flair was needed, got me thinking about a sports car, could only be a Mclaren, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith February 8, 2021 at 8:19 AM Congratulations on your win. Caren must not sleep. Could it be she writes in her sleep???? Have a blessed day.............. David Kavanagh February 8, 2021 at 8:33 AM Heya Paula, A somnambulant poet ummm, that would explain all the spelling mistakes, you might have cracked it, cheers David

Mark Koplin February 7, 2021 at 12:11 PM Congratulations on your win, David! David Kavanagh February 7, 2021 at 12:20 PM Heya Mark, was delighted to in the mix, with my little poke at Caren, cheers David

Alexis Y. February 7, 2021 at 11:59 AM Hi David, Caren is awesome. Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis David Kavanagh February 7, 2021 at 12:18 PM Heya Alexis, she’s outrageously good, a typical mclaren cheers David

Jan Allison February 7, 2021 at 6:14 AM Dropping back with many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx David Kavanagh February 7, 2021 at 6:50 AM Thanks Jan she really is a Grand Prix poet, such stamina, cheers David

Eve Roper February 6, 2021 at 11:31 PM Love it, David, congratulations on your win .Hugs Eve David Kavanagh February 7, 2021 at 12:34 AM Thank you Eve must give all the credit to Caren, cheers david

Line Gauthier February 6, 2021 at 6:16 PM well done ~ David Kavanagh February 7, 2021 at 12:32 AM Thank you Line, she’s always in the fast lane, cheers david

Caren Krutsinger January 23, 2021 at 4:22 AM Thank you David, and of course, it gets better and better every time I see it! I appreciate this lovely tribute my friend! David Kavanagh January 23, 2021 at 4:40 AM Your welcome Caren, This one is the new finished edition, straight off the factory line, a new mclaren for Caren, can see you behind the wheel doing doughnuts, cheers David

Jan Allison January 22, 2021 at 7:53 AM she certainly is amazing with her output of ten quality poems a day:-) hugs jan xx David Kavanagh January 22, 2021 at 8:12 AM And all the comments Jan, plus replies to everyone, I said it before she has ten clones, working shifts on the soup, I’m at a loss, cheers David