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Caren the Mclaren

no lay about souped up speed ~ omnipresent in a different league Tease a Friend Poetry Contest Sponsored by Bobby May 22/01/21 (17) syllables

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John Watt

Date: 2/8/2021 8:37:00 AM

David, I agree, Caren is in a different league. I love the imagery of a McLaren to represent her amazingly prolific writing of both poetry and friendly comments. Well done on your #1 ~ John

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/8/2021 8:42:00 AM

Thanks John, I had this speed machine in mind, but then style and flair was needed, got me thinking about a sports car, could only be a Mclaren, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/8/2021 8:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Caren must not sleep. Could it be she writes in her sleep???? Have a blessed day..............

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/8/2021 8:33:00 AM

Heya Paula, A somnambulant poet ummm, that would explain all the spelling mistakes, you might have cracked it, cheers David

Mark Koplin

Date: 2/7/2021 12:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, David!

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/7/2021 12:20:00 PM

Heya Mark, was delighted to in the mix, with my little poke at Caren, cheers David

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/7/2021 11:59:00 AM

Hi David, Caren is awesome. Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/7/2021 12:18:00 PM

Heya Alexis, she’s outrageously good, a typical mclaren cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 2/7/2021 6:14:00 AM

Dropping back with many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/7/2021 6:50:00 AM

Thanks Jan she really is a Grand Prix poet, such stamina, cheers David

Eve Roper

Date: 2/6/2021 11:31:00 PM

Love it, David, congratulations on your win .Hugs Eve

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/7/2021 12:34:00 AM

Thank you Eve must give all the credit to Caren, cheers david

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/6/2021 6:16:00 PM

well done ~

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/7/2021 12:32:00 AM

Thank you Line, she’s always in the fast lane, cheers david

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/23/2021 4:22:00 AM

Thank you David, and of course, it gets better and better every time I see it! I appreciate this lovely tribute my friend!

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/23/2021 4:40:00 AM

Your welcome Caren, This one is the new finished edition, straight off the factory line, a new mclaren for Caren, can see you behind the wheel doing doughnuts, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 1/22/2021 7:53:00 AM

she certainly is amazing with her output of ten quality poems a day:-) hugs jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/22/2021 8:12:00 AM

And all the comments Jan, plus replies to everyone, I said it before she has ten clones, working shifts on the soup, I’m at a loss, cheers David