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Careless Voicing

Before publishing contest news I was on the floating sky heart With the blinking stars to reuse The love for lyrics on wise art Mortal I’m for the birth cradle But the astute light of the heart Shows the couplet of hope bugle To live long in the verse of smart Immortal wisdom defeats lamp Of the writing challenge in flow But the winner sun runs on ramp Cause the loser has no tint show Rainbow recites the winner’s line Dark cloud absorbs the loser’s brine © Mahtab bangalee Chattogram 04/03/2023

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/6/2023 12:40:00 PM

Mahtab, how interesting this poem is! I see no losers in contests. I think all should get a trophy. Once my poem is done, it is a winner as I see God as the authentic judge. And no matter how we write, it is us. Once a year to participate makes sense, I do have strong feelings on this. I trust God more than any poet,. Thank you for sharing your poetic finesse! Panagiota

Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 3/6/2023 7:05:00 PM

Dear Poet Thank you very much for your kind words and opinions