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Careful What our mouth says, can take down whole lifetimes of dreams, topple possibilities, and short change the faith of true miracles. Somehow we think, because we are close, family, or friends, that there is freedom, to be cruel. Words that fall from the sky, “I am not happy and you are fat.” Deeply look into the mirror, the one, you keep hidden, beyond the Curtain of Oz… You gained weight. You stopped trying. You are nothing like, the man you were… before you said I do. You are fatter. You eat too much, because you are blessed, by a wealth of stupidity. Gained things, can be lost. You are on the road, to Vegas now. They know all about losing, and welcome losers with open arms.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/23/2019 7:23:00 AM
"welcome losers with open arms" - UGH! You have NAILED it.
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Ann Foster
Date: 11/23/2019 11:24:00 AM
Thank you. It actually took a very light hammer, as the truth is hidden in plain sight. We just choose to ignore it. Hugs and flowers. Ann
Date: 11/22/2019 1:40:00 PM
OUCH Ann. Painful words for sure, as I try to see my toes below my belly lol.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 11/23/2019 5:58:00 PM
All is well with me Ann. Thanks for the concern. So sorry to read this about your friends.
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Ann Foster
Date: 11/23/2019 11:23:00 AM
Start walking. Eat no sugar. I lost 40in no time. Shocking "sugar". This was written as friends have had husbands dump them lately. Leaving their kids, their responsibilities and saying it is all the wife. Nothing they did at all. No judgment on the reader friend. Just saying we could all do better. Have the best day. Ann

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