Carefree Summer

The ocean brings a lazy slumber
Coconut oil and the scent of her next to me
Seagulls sing in a faint distant orchestra
On a blanket 
The sun warmly, peacefully delights me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Mcintosh Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 4:10 AM
Lovely write. God bless you. Love, Gina
Horsman Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 1:57 AM
The visual is superb, so is the poetry.
Tarpey Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 8:08 PM
Harry thank you so much! from Patrick
Nicole Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 11:56 AM
Such a beautiful "Carefree Summer" indeed. With "Coconut oil and the scent of her" Your thoughts leave me breathless. :) Brandy
Tarpey Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 6:46 PM
Brandy Nicole, I thank you for your warm kind words from Patrick
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