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Carefree Summer

The ocean brings a lazy slumber Coconut oil and the scent of her next to me Seagulls sing in a faint distant orchestra On a blanket The sun warmly, peacefully delights me

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Date: 10/14/2021 4:10:00 AM
Lovely write. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 6/11/2021 1:57:00 AM
The visual is superb, so is the poetry.
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Patrick Edward Tarpey
Date: 6/15/2021 8:08:00 PM
Harry thank you so much! from Patrick
Date: 6/8/2021 11:56:00 AM
Such a beautiful "Carefree Summer" indeed. With "Coconut oil and the scent of her" Your thoughts leave me breathless. :) Brandy
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Patrick Edward Tarpey
Date: 6/10/2021 6:46:00 PM
Brandy Nicole, I thank you for your warm kind words from Patrick

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