Carefree

When reminiscing, I can clearly see
		two laughing teenage girls who cruised carefree.
 		Life showed her gentle, smiling side as we 
		shared dreams and secrets to the nth degree
		and danced away most days quite happily.



posted March 18, 2016

entered in Brian Strand's Contest 237 (any topic or form, 10-line max) on
November 12, 2016    placed 6th

June 15, 2022
entered in the Bite Size no. 47 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
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May Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 1:43 PM
Wonderful write and win ...Congrats
Canerdy Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 1:45 PM
Joseph, thanks so much! Janice
La France Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 9:53 AM
Janice congratulations on your win ~
Canerdy Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 1:36 PM
Thanks so much, Constance! Janice
Haight Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 9:21 AM
So beautifully nostalgic, Janice. Congratulations on your placement! Hugs, Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 1:37 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra! Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 9:56 PM
Lovely write, Janice!
Canerdy Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 11:22 PM
Thank you so much, Kim! Janice
Roper Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 9:46 AM
Wonderful write, Janice, congratulations on your win!
Canerdy Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 10:41 AM
Eve, thank you so much! Janice
Haight Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 8:09 AM
Heartwarming poem about Laura's dogs, Janice. Congrats on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 4:40 PM
Thank you, Sandra. Janice
A. Sharma Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 12:05 AM
Congrats on ur deserved top podium with this awesome write Janice..
Canerdy Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 8:36 AM
Thank you so much, Upma! Janice
Scars Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 8:36 PM
Janice I love this!!! My pug and his cousin were best friends! Unfortunately poor MIlo passed away a few weeks ago, si this touched my heart, thank you :)-luloo
Scars Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 11:01 AM
You're welcome...
Canerdy Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 8:53 PM
Luloo, thank you for this touching response! Janice
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