Jeanne Mcgee Poet Tetractys

Carefree

as
carefree
as the sea
rolling to shore
a walk along it's edge caresses me
sand gently tickles against barefoot toes
with soft felt breeze
salty mist
lovers
 kiss



9-5-2020
Double Tetractys 2 Poetry Contest  photo #2

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Paul Callus September 18, 2020 at 12:13 PM Lovely with a romantic touch to it, Jeanne. Would have loved to see this one higher up the list! Congratulations! Regards // paul

Eve Roper September 17, 2020 at 7:18 PM Lovely write, Jeanne .. Congrats on your wonderful win :) <3 Hugs Eve..

Nette Onclaud September 8, 2020 at 11:37 AM gently romancing the lines, jeanne...a delight to read you!...huggs

Newton Ranaweera September 7, 2020 at 11:02 AM I can see and I can feel slushy sand in this great piece!! Jeanne Mcgee September 7, 2020 at 12:01 PM Hola Newton! Thanks for stopping by for a comment...really appreciate you running your toes through the sand with me. :D

Gershon Wolf September 6, 2020 at 8:27 PM salty mist... lovers kiss... Just a perfect denouement, Jeanne! Lovely penned, Gershon Jeanne Mcgee September 6, 2020 at 8:43 PM Ahhh, thanks Gershon. So very kind of you to say! Jeanne

Susan Ashley September 6, 2020 at 7:37 PM Both love and the sea are beautifully depicted in this lovely piece, Jeanne. "salty mist lovers kiss" seems like bliss! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Jeanne Mcgee September 6, 2020 at 8:42 PM warm thanks and appreciation for your kind words Susan.