Carefree

as carefree as the sea rolling to shore a walk along it's edge caresses me sand gently tickles against barefoot toes with soft felt breeze salty mist lovers kiss 9-5-2020 Double Tetractys 2 Poetry Contest photo #2

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Paul Callus

Date: 9/18/2020 12:13:00 PM

Lovely with a romantic touch to it, Jeanne. Would have loved to see this one higher up the list! Congratulations! Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 9/17/2020 7:18:00 PM

Lovely write, Jeanne .. Congrats on your wonderful win :) <3 Hugs Eve..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/8/2020 11:37:00 AM

gently romancing the lines, jeanne...a delight to read you!...huggs

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 9/7/2020 11:02:00 AM

I can see and I can feel slushy sand in this great piece!!

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/7/2020 12:01:00 PM

Hola Newton! Thanks for stopping by for a comment...really appreciate you running your toes through the sand with me. :D

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/6/2020 8:27:00 PM

salty mist... lovers kiss... Just a perfect denouement, Jeanne! Lovely penned, Gershon

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/6/2020 8:43:00 PM

Ahhh, thanks Gershon. So very kind of you to say! Jeanne

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/6/2020 7:37:00 PM

Both love and the sea are beautifully depicted in this lovely piece, Jeanne. "salty mist lovers kiss" seems like bliss! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/6/2020 8:42:00 PM

warm thanks and appreciation for your kind words Susan.