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Care to Live

Do you love me Do I even care Care enough to find out Care because I should Should I ask you Should you respond Respond to my question Respond with the truth Truth is I do Truth is I don’t Don’t break my heart Don’t let me break yours Yours faithfully Yours truly Truly human Truly Madly Deeply Deeply devoted to you Deeply disturbing Disturbing behavior Disturbing my peace of mind Mind altering drugs Mind numbing Numbing all the pain Numbing my thoughts inside Inside I’m screaming Inside you is nothing Nothing I can understand Nothing that I want to To all your lies To all your sins Sins against my heart Sins I can’t forgive Forgive me for the craziness Forgive me just this once Once you do I can relax Once you can finally decide Decide what you want Decide what comes next Next in this life Next just beyond Beyond what you are Beyond what we will be Be together forever Be apart for as long Long as you need me Long as I live Live to know the real you Live to show you me Me… You…
Blitz of Words Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silent One Place: Honorable Mention

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Date: 2/19/2024 9:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Silent One's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
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Date: 2/17/2024 10:51:00 AM
Hey Courtney your poem was excellent, however, I am not sure you are aware, but in contests you are not allowed to have any information in the poem section.. but I did not want to give your efforts an NA, so I awarded you with a Honourable Mention...
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Courtney Hubbert
Date: 2/17/2024 11:38:00 AM
Oh I didn’t know that. I was told previously to add the sponsor but omit my name. Thank you for the heads up.
Date: 2/8/2024 6:58:00 PM
Ooh you've got a Savage Garden song tucked into your really cool blitz. Nice
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Courtney Hubbert
Date: 2/11/2024 9:13:00 AM
Nice catch there friend. Thank you for the compliment. xxx

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