Care of Heaven

Hello dear friend – so – what’s new?
Tell me - How have you been?
There’s so much I want to share with you
But I hardly know where to begin

The news from here’s both good and bad
But life can be like that, I suppose
Most things are going well, though we’re all still sad
When we’ll be through missing you - no one knows

Are you an Angel looking down on me?
Or have you become part of eternity?

This letter will travel very far
By air-mail – on the wings of a dove
She’ll turn left at the Northern Star
Watch for her flying high above
With an envelope addressed “Care of Heaven”
I’ve sent it to you, with my love 

Tell me - do you slumber, do you still dream?
Can you float on clouds all day long?
Have they got more than 31 flavors of ice cream?
Does a harp now accompany you in song?

Have you ever seen the face of God?
Are the streets truly paved with gold?
Do you spend your summers in Cape Cod
Head for Tahiti when the weather turns cold?

I know it’s silly to go on this way 
But I wish you were with me today

This letter will travel very far
By air-mail – on the wings of a dove
She’ll turn left at the Northern Star
Watch for her flying high above
With an envelope addressed “Care of Heaven”
I’ve sent it to you, with my love 

Sometimes, at the end of the day
I think I hear you softly say:
“I’m still here - I haven’t gone away”
Is that my heart playing tricks on me?

Remember that park  - the one with the pine trees?
It’s as beautiful as it was back then
Whenever I visit I have sweet memories 
And pray that we’ll see each other again 

And so, dear friend, you’ll always be missed
I seal this envelope with a kiss 

This letter has traveled very far
By air-mail – on the wings of a dove
I’ll think of you always, wherever you are
And picture you somewhere high above
Happy to be in the Care of Heaven
Enfolded in infinite love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/3/2010 3:44:00 PM
Thankxxx Corinne for your excellent blog comment today.. much appreciated and I am going to print out all the comments to give to my son to take with him as he prepares to leave... appreciate your input, support, prayers, luv and friendship...luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 2/1/2010 3:47:00 AM
very beautiful and heart felt to the reader also. Congratulations on a well deserved win. -Robert
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Date: 1/31/2010 8:29:00 AM
Very original work Corinne.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words and welcome comments today
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Date: 1/31/2010 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations Cirunne, You wrote well! Your “Angels” contest entry, sponsored by: “A Rambling Poet” is the 1st place winner! Not only did you do at great job letting your creativity flow, but were you speedy enough to enter! (LOL) Keep up the good writing. I love this long letter to someone you love, who is in heaven. SMILES… Dane Ann
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Date: 1/30/2010 8:51:00 PM
Congrats Corinne on your first place win in the Angels contest.. great write from a collector of Angels who treasures them... beautiful words for a well deserved win.. and thankxxx so so much for your special comments on my blog and poetry always.. onto writing new and better poetry for me.. thankxxx again for being a good friend.. luv.. nice to be HOME.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/30/2010 7:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem, it was a pleasure to read and although sad in a way also very calming.. well done...Margaret
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Date: 1/30/2010 6:10:00 PM
What an interesting poem , to imagine a dear friend as an angel now! Loved that repeating stanza you put inside your poem too.Congratulations on your first place win! Andrea
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Date: 1/30/2010 5:32:00 PM
I'm not surprised this poem took first place in the contest, Corinne. Well done!
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Date: 1/30/2010 5:05:00 PM
Congratulations on first place in my contest, Angels, with this beautiful poem.
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Date: 1/30/2010 6:25:00 AM
Beautifully written
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Date: 1/30/2010 1:49:00 AM
We all have loved ones who have passed away and it helps to think of them as angels watching over us from heaven. This is another fine entry for Constance's contest. Best wishes fr success. Love, Carolyn
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