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"When a cardinal appears in your yard, it's a visitor from heaven." Author Unknown Red holiday bright feathers contrast against the white snow While most birds fly south your beauty now steals the show You appear at my feeders, loudly singing your distinctive cheer Your beautiful mate must be close by and will soon be near Beautiful muted brownish tan feathers soon appear beside you She sings her cheerful song, while preening dirty feathers new Feasting on black sunflower seeds this early winter morning Territorial chirps soon emit for all other birds to take warning A snow squall starts to blow heavy snow all around Your red is barely visible now but not your loud sound The feeders are now snow covered and with no birds to see Red and brown feathers gone but now singing up high in a tree 10/6/19 Contest: Writing Challenge - October 2019, Bird Sponsor: Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 10/25/2019 6:32:00 PM
Tania, congratulations on your great win. Hugs Eve
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/25/2019 8:13:00 PM
Thank you Eve! :)
Date: 10/22/2019 11:42:00 AM
Tania congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem and I love the quote and image too!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/22/2019 6:30:00 PM
Thank you Constance and for my placement as well!
Date: 10/21/2019 5:17:00 AM
wow Tania thanks for introducing me to this colourful bird with your descriptive poem, its not one we see here, a joy to read you today, :-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/21/2019 12:03:00 PM
Thank you Jan, what I really like about Cardinals is that they mate for life and when you see the male bird the female usually appears. I tried to emphasize that in my poem. Hugs
Date: 10/20/2019 1:04:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Tania :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/20/2019 4:27:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise! :)
Date: 10/6/2019 8:44:00 PM
there is nothing so lovely as to spot such a colorful bird in winter. Strange how the "guys" get to be the stunners!! Very nicely done, Tania.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/7/2019 4:23:00 AM
Thank you Andrea! :)
Date: 10/6/2019 7:14:00 AM
Beautiful imagery for lovely birds...
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/6/2019 7:42:00 AM
Thank you Silent One!
Date: 10/6/2019 7:09:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem for cardinals. I love them - They're beautiful birds and your poem is lovely. God bless you, Gina
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/6/2019 7:42:00 AM
Thank you Gina, I just love birds so much, thanks for your visit! :)
Date: 10/6/2019 6:07:00 AM
Beautiful poem dedicated to cardinals! Well done :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/6/2019 6:15:00 AM
Thank you Heidi!

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