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Cardinals

"When a cardinal appears in your yard, it's a visitor from heaven." Author Unknown


Red holiday bright feathers contrast against the white snow
While most birds fly south your beauty now steals the show
You appear at my feeders, loudly singing your distinctive cheer
Your beautiful mate must be close by and will soon be near 

Beautiful muted brownish tan feathers soon appear beside you
She sings her cheerful song, while preening dirty feathers new
Feasting on black sunflower seeds this early winter morning
Territorial chirps soon emit for all other birds to take warning 

A snow squall starts to blow heavy snow all around
Your red is barely visible now but not your loud sound
The feeders are now snow covered and with no birds to see
Red and brown feathers gone but now singing up high in a tree

10/6/19

Contest: Writing Challenge - October 2019, Bird
Sponsor: Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode
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Roper Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 6:32 PM
Tania, congratulations on your great win. Hugs Eve
Kitchin Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 8:13 PM
Thank you Eve! :)
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October 22, 2019 at 11:42 AM
Tania congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem and I love the quote and image too!
Kitchin Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 6:30 PM
Thank you Constance and for my placement as well!
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 5:17 AM
wow Tania thanks for introducing me to this colourful bird with your descriptive poem, its not one we see here, a joy to read you today, :-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 12:03 PM
Thank you Jan, what I really like about Cardinals is that they mate for life and when you see the male bird the female usually appears. I tried to emphasize that in my poem. Hugs
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October 20, 2019 at 1:04 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Tania :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Kitchin Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 4:27 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise! :)
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October 6, 2019 at 8:44 PM
there is nothing so lovely as to spot such a colorful bird in winter. Strange how the "guys" get to be the stunners!! Very nicely done, Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 4:23 AM
Thank you Andrea! :)
One Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 7:14 AM
Beautiful imagery for lovely birds...
Kitchin Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 7:42 AM
Thank you Silent One!
Mcintosh Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 7:09 AM
This is a wonderful poem for cardinals. I love them - They're beautiful birds and your poem is lovely. God bless you, Gina
Kitchin Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 7:42 AM
Thank you Gina, I just love birds so much, thanks for your visit! :)
Sands Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 6:07 AM
Beautiful poem dedicated to cardinals! Well done :)
Kitchin Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 6:15 AM
Thank you Heidi!
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