Cardinal Autumn Haiku

cardinal red wings
bright feathers flash in the sun
welcoming autumn
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Elliott Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 8:11 AM
Hi Danny, beauteous haiku. I’m a nature/bird lover and this haiku really resonates with me. We have cardinal visitors frequently in our yard. Love observing the free birds. Thank you for penning such a lovely poem. Blessings :)
Derden Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 9:10 AM
Thank you.
Derden Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 8:17 AM
Thank you.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 5:00 PM
another outstanding Haiku, Danny. I was thinking today about writing a poem about cardinals. I see them here every morning, entranced by their elegant beauty. nicely done.
Derden Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 5:08 PM
I have 3 or 4 couples that visit my bird feeder daily...when the Jays allow them!
Godwin Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 11:44 AM
This one I painted an image in my head, so much red, so beautiful. Lived in Virginia many years where Cardinal is state birth, oh, the males are gorgeous.
Derden Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 5:08 PM
Thank you.
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