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Carcharodon Carcharius

Lurks beneath surface Prehistoric predator Stalks prey unnoticed

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James Fraser

Date: 8/21/2009 2:51:00 PM

Super write for the Great White, sadly mans it's only enemy. How tragic is that, excellent James>>James

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 8/12/2009 8:39:00 AM

you have a very vast mind James! it is prehistoric but also still one of the most living, feared by many surfers and seals, and closer to Australia, your definitely going to need a bigger boat when he's around :P liked how you got my mind thinking

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/12/2009 5:12:00 AM

Wow James what a write. Outstanding Haiku. Love, Carol

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/11/2009 5:15:00 PM

Sounds like the Loch Ness monster. Intriguing! Yours Matthew Anish

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/11/2009 4:34:00 PM

Interesting Haiku. Sara