Carcharodon Carcharius

Lurks beneath surface
Prehistoric predator
Stalks prey unnoticed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
August 21, 2009 at 2:51 PM
Super write for the Great White, sadly mans it's only enemy. How tragic is that, excellent James>>James
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August 12, 2009 at 8:39 AM
you have a very vast mind James! it is prehistoric but also still one of the most living, feared by many surfers and seals, and closer to Australia, your definitely going to need a bigger boat when he's around :P liked how you got my mind thinking
Brown Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 5:12 AM
Wow James what a write. Outstanding Haiku. Love, Carol
Anish Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 5:15 PM
Sounds like the Loch Ness monster. Intriguing! Yours Matthew Anish
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August 11, 2009 at 4:34 PM
Interesting Haiku. Sara
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