Carbonated Sizzle Stop

Carbonated sizzle STOP 
me ....before I start!
I feel the vrrrroom in the room
take me to your carburetor
drop me into first gear
headed... where? .....Homespun 

Oil buster
dirt riding
lowwwwly... throttle neck
Chevy Pick me upper

"you moooove me"
but
Ferrari makes me starry
lamborghini makes me weak

I am grinding my gears here

there's quakes in my breaks...
been riding the straight down
to volume-ator creator 
breaking up the road 
walker
gassing up for the mighty miles
till this life us do part
ways to go 
to the finish me line
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 10, 2016 at 11:43 PM
Hi Ingrid, Congrats on your win. Love * SKAT *
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January 14, 2016 at 8:51 AM
Thank you Skat! :)
A   Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 10:42 PM
Ingrid :) Congratulations on your awesome win. ""You showed me yours-- now's my turn to show you mine --- LADIES"" Stop by my latest blog if you'd like. I have no poem to share under this topic. In which you wrote bravely. I'd like to share photos of my BUDDY (car).......... Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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January 14, 2016 at 8:52 AM
Thank you Linda I really enjoyed this!
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