Carbonated Sizzle Stop

Carbonated sizzle STOP me ....before I start! I feel the vrrrroom in the room take me to your carburetor drop me into first gear headed... where? .....Homespun Oil buster dirt riding lowwwwly... throttle neck Chevy Pick me upper "you moooove me" but Ferrari makes me starry lamborghini makes me weak I am grinding my gears here there's quakes in my breaks... been riding the straight down to volume-ator creator breaking up the road walker gassing up for the mighty miles till this life us do part ways to go to the finish me line

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Skat A

Date: 1/10/2016 11:43:00 PM

Hi Ingrid, Congrats on your win. Love * SKAT *

Ingrid Showalter Swift
Date: 1/14/2016 8:51:00 AM

Thank you Skat! :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/10/2016 10:42:00 PM

Ingrid :) Congratulations on your awesome win. ""You showed me yours-- now's my turn to show you mine --- LADIES"" Stop by my latest blog if you'd like. I have no poem to share under this topic. In which you wrote bravely. I'd like to share photos of my BUDDY (car).......... Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Ingrid Showalter Swift
Date: 1/14/2016 8:52:00 AM

Thank you Linda I really enjoyed this!