"hermit crab"-image from lhcos.org
poem originally published at creativeramblings.com/poetry/complete-the-haiga-4
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Tiny carapace scavenger—borrowed home wobbles across tidal gossip, the ocean's leftover breath. One claw dips into a vanishing puddle, testing the myth of endless retreat. The tide writes, then rewrites, its invitation in evening sand.
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