Caramelized

burnt sugar caramelized hopes and dreams patience learned

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Gail Debole

Date: 11/3/2012 1:46:00 PM

Hi Ann - Good one! I thought by the title that this was going to be a poem about food. Like the twist and deeper meaning. Glad you got a chuckle from my poem! - Gail

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/2/2012 6:03:00 PM

Yummy, when is it being served? Thanks for serving up a sweet poem.

Darrel Smith

Date: 11/2/2012 3:29:00 PM

from someone who has burnt more sugar then he would like to admit well written

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/2/2012 3:05:00 PM

Mmmm .... - Delicious and sweet - Well written Ann - Have a nice weekend. - - / / Anne-Lise :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/2/2012 1:16:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today I have enjoyed reading it. Have a great weekend Ann. Love, Carol