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Caramel Love

**** For my Caramel Swirl****

Cinnamon flavored,
my caramel love.
Soft inside with a tough candy shell.
My after work
desert.
A cure for my sweet tooth,
not a pervert,
I yearn for her vermouth


Name held until contest is over.....
4/15/2010

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 20, 2010 at 12:44 PM

Hey Mr. J.. can u please check and see if all your entries are intact as all mine have disappeard from my contest... please let me know...thankxxx luv.. "Sweetheart"

Allie Lusha

April 19, 2010 at 11:22 AM

Sweet like sugar...enjoyed...Allie

Doris Culverhouse

April 19, 2010 at 5:29 AM

enjoyed reading

Andrea Dietrich

April 18, 2010 at 1:34 AM

Oh, my goodness, you did another caramel poem! I love it, now i have to tell you something in soup mail

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 15, 2010 at 10:03 PM

Good luck in the contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 15, 2010 at 2:43 PM

Good luck in the contest, whichever one it was.. food for soul maybe ... or wow me with inspiration..great write ... that caramel queen must had really impressed u much.. good for her ..one point for the ladies... how about "buying" her a "star" .. in my contest and please take the Poetry Poll on my blog..thankxxx Lone Wolf...luv.. "Sweetheart"

Poet Destroyer A

April 15, 2010 at 7:29 AM

Nice way to describe the taste you have for someone. Good luck in the contest.

Charmaine Chircop

April 15, 2010 at 2:44 AM

This is a very sweet dedication.I wonder why the Caramel Swirl keeps that tough shell wall,I wonder why she resists such care.touching poem,Re the daily desert,becareful,too much sugar can be deadly,lol!'tnks for this fun poem dear friend,Now go taste the cadbury girls and enjoy!:) Charma.(to my favs).

Jared Pickett

March 6, 2014 at 9:32 AM

The Cadbury girls, heard that!!;-)Asavvy1