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Caramel Fields

Through the corridors of bare trees, I can see caramel colored fields Shimmering in the sun I stand on green grass, left-over from summer Before, I walk on the crunching puddles Already frozen with ice I am in the middle of the seasons That are saying goodbye and hello Readying for a long winter walk Through many passages of time With so far to go Heidi Sands 11/23/19

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Gary Radice

Date: 12/4/2019 7:37:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this very descriptive work. I visualize a time and place on the cusp of change.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/4/2019 8:22:00 AM

I am happy to hear you enjoyed this. Thank you :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/25/2019 4:59:00 PM

Somehow I can just picture the seasons saying hello and goodbye to you, my friend, as you stand in their midst. Such a personalized poem! :) gw

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/25/2019 5:18:00 PM

Thank you Gershon. I was certainly standing in their midst :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 11/25/2019 12:00:00 PM

I like this. Thank you. Kind wishes, Kai

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/25/2019 12:01:00 PM

I am happy you like it Kai. You are welcome. And thank you for your comment on this :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/25/2019 11:26:00 AM

I love the caramel fields and do not look forward to the harshness of winter. It came to early this year. Excellent write. love phyl

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/25/2019 12:00:00 PM

I loved seeing the caramel fields too and I also don't look forward to the harshness of winter. But I will try to find the beautiful winter sights. Thank you Phyllis :)

Charles Messina

Date: 11/25/2019 7:57:00 AM

Great imagery...it's a somewhat scary time, knowing that the harsh winter will soon be here. Excellent write Heidi..love this! Charlie

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/25/2019 8:16:00 AM

Yes, the harsh winter can certainly surface some fears Charlie. Thank you for your kind comment on this :) I hope you have a nice day !

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/25/2019 12:47:00 AM

Your description of the caramel colored fields makes me smile. What a great poem Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/25/2019 7:11:00 AM

I am happy to hear that Caren. Keep smiling :) Thank you!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/24/2019 6:02:00 PM

Yes, we're about to change, beautiful, "saying goodbye and hello"; well done.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/25/2019 7:10:00 AM

Thank you very much M.L. :)

Pashang Salehi

Date: 11/24/2019 5:42:00 AM

What wonderful little painting you made...

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/24/2019 8:16:00 AM

Thank you very much Pashang :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 11/24/2019 12:50:00 AM

Winter scene nicely portrayed, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/24/2019 8:16:00 AM

Thank you Subimal. I appreciate your kind comments :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 11/23/2019 11:57:00 PM

Heidi, What a nice walk to take on ice. 'Readying for a long winter walk Through many passages of time With so far to go...' That is so nice. -Richard

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/24/2019 8:15:00 AM

Thank you very much Richard :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/23/2019 4:51:00 PM

Great imagery on the edge of two seasons--I enjoyed the read, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/23/2019 7:06:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. I am happy you enjoyed it :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/23/2019 4:30:00 PM

Nice alliteration and delicious language.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/23/2019 7:05:00 PM

Thank you very much Kim :)