Heidi Sands Poet Free verse

Caramel Fields

Through the corridors of bare trees,
I can see caramel colored fields
Shimmering in the sun
I stand on green grass, left-over from summer
Before, I walk on the crunching puddles
Already frozen with ice
I am in the middle of the seasons
That are saying goodbye and hello
Readying for a long winter walk
Through many passages of time
            With so far to go

Heidi Sands

11/23/19

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Gary Radice December 4, 2019 at 7:37 AM I enjoyed reading this very descriptive work. I visualize a time and place on the cusp of change. Heidi Sands December 4, 2019 at 8:22 AM I am happy to hear you enjoyed this. Thank you :)

Gershon Wolf November 25, 2019 at 4:59 PM Somehow I can just picture the seasons saying hello and goodbye to you, my friend, as you stand in their midst. Such a personalized poem! :) gw Heidi Sands November 25, 2019 at 5:18 PM Thank you Gershon. I was certainly standing in their midst :)

Kai Michael Neumann November 25, 2019 at 12:00 PM I like this. Thank you. Kind wishes, Kai Heidi Sands November 25, 2019 at 12:01 PM I am happy you like it Kai. You are welcome. And thank you for your comment on this :)

Phyllis Babcock November 25, 2019 at 11:26 AM I love the caramel fields and do not look forward to the harshness of winter. It came to early this year. Excellent write. love phyl Heidi Sands November 25, 2019 at 12:00 PM I loved seeing the caramel fields too and I also don't look forward to the harshness of winter. But I will try to find the beautiful winter sights. Thank you Phyllis :)

Charles Messina November 25, 2019 at 7:57 AM Great imagery...it's a somewhat scary time, knowing that the harsh winter will soon be here. Excellent write Heidi..love this! Charlie Heidi Sands November 25, 2019 at 8:16 AM Yes, the harsh winter can certainly surface some fears Charlie. Thank you for your kind comment on this :) I hope you have a nice day !

Caren Krutsinger November 25, 2019 at 12:47 AM Your description of the caramel colored fields makes me smile. What a great poem Heidi! Heidi Sands November 25, 2019 at 7:11 AM I am happy to hear that Caren. Keep smiling :) Thank you!

M. L. Kiser November 24, 2019 at 6:02 PM Yes, we're about to change, beautiful, "saying goodbye and hello"; well done. Heidi Sands November 25, 2019 at 7:10 AM Thank you very much M.L. :)

Pashang Salehi November 24, 2019 at 5:42 AM What wonderful little painting you made... Heidi Sands November 24, 2019 at 8:16 AM Thank you very much Pashang :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy November 24, 2019 at 12:50 AM Winter scene nicely portrayed, Heidi. Heidi Sands November 24, 2019 at 8:16 AM Thank you Subimal. I appreciate your kind comments :)

Quoth Theraven November 23, 2019 at 11:57 PM Heidi, What a nice walk to take on ice. 'Readying for a long winter walk Through many passages of time With so far to go...' That is so nice. -Richard Heidi Sands November 24, 2019 at 8:15 AM Thank you very much Richard :)

Vijay Pandit November 23, 2019 at 4:51 PM Great imagery on the edge of two seasons--I enjoyed the read, Heidi. Heidi Sands November 23, 2019 at 7:06 PM Thank you Vijay. I am happy you enjoyed it :)

Kim Rodrigues November 23, 2019 at 4:30 PM Nice alliteration and delicious language. Heidi Sands November 23, 2019 at 7:05 PM Thank you very much Kim :)