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Car Troubles

My car is old and fallin apart Sometimes it doesn't even want to start It has a hood the color blue I really wish for something new A lotto win, a ton of cash I'd buy a new one in a flash Maybe with a little luck It could be a pickup truck

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/17/2014 11:13:00 PM
If my car were a horse, I would have to shoot it! Nice little write which was very enjoyable to read.
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Date: 12/30/2013 4:05:00 PM
I L'DMAO and can relate to how things went with my old car until it left me stranded. I wish for the same and with you luck. BRAVO
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