William Richardson Poet Rhyme

Car Troubles

My car is old and fallin apart
Sometimes it doesn't even want to start
It has a hood the color blue
I really wish for something new
A lotto win, a ton of cash
I'd buy a new one in a flash
Maybe with a little luck
It could be a pickup truck

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Robert Pettit January 17, 2014 at 11:13 PM If my car were a horse, I would have to shoot it! Nice little write which was very enjoyable to read.

Shawn Munoz December 30, 2013 at 4:05 PM I L'DMAO and can relate to how things went with my old car until it left me stranded. I wish for the same and with you luck. BRAVO