Car Sick Nursery Rhyme

My cousin Suzy was feeling quite woozy as we drove along in the car Her sister Lizzy said “why are you dizzy we really aren’t going that far” Their brother Vic said, “She’s gonna be sick” as he rolled down the window real fast Mom seemed to worry, slowed down in a hurry till all of the other cars passed Suzy was green if you know what I mean as she hung her head outside the door Lizzy cried ooh at the foul smelling goo for she couldn’t quite take anymore Vic after while wore a devilish smile while proclaiming, “Man that was so cool” Mom shook her head as she quietly said “I can’t wait till they’re all back in school”
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Roper Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 1:51 PM
You also have "Buster's ball" going in
Roper Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 2:18 AM
I found this beauty, I copied for the Nursery Rhyme Book hope you don't mine. Hugs Eve
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March 22, 2023 at 1:49 PM
Look at my blog my friend.
Green Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 6:56 AM
Hi Eve. it is so nice to see you again. I don't mind at all. What is the Nursery Rhyme book?
Wolf Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 9:08 PM
I think that you have a 2020 'Dr. Seuss Revisited' bone in you there, Chris. I enjoy the rhymes and the touch of naughtiness. ~ Septuaginarian going on 8, gw
Green Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 6:33 AM
Thanks so much my friend. I'm still hanging around 6 years old...see you in a bit. : )
Jayasankar Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 7:42 AM
Such a well penned funny nursery rhyme Chris... Congrats on your win... God bless... ~ Ani
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October 19, 2021 at 6:33 AM
Thank you for your kind words
Thirtyseven Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 2:31 AM
Well penned, and a fun treat to read. Much enjoyed.
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October 19, 2021 at 6:32 AM
Thanks so much Scott
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October 13, 2021 at 12:14 PM
Very funny! My husband was on a road trip with the kids. My daughter felt sick, put her head out the window and oops went her glasses. Took them a bit to find them. For a while I used the term “losing your glasses” for getting sick. I don’t think my daughter found that funny so I stopped.
Green Avatar
October 13, 2021 at 1:50 PM
That is a funny story for sure and I can understand why she might not have appreciated it. : ) Thanks so much Kim
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October 12, 2021 at 12:42 PM
...ARE WE THERE YET????
Green Avatar
October 13, 2021 at 1:50 PM
Almost!!!
Jones Avatar
October 12, 2021 at 12:15 PM
Whimsical and fun like a nursery rhyme should be. Moms love it most. Good job
Green Avatar
October 13, 2021 at 1:49 PM
Thank you so much Karen
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October 12, 2021 at 10:10 AM
Wow!Chris, I enjoyed your "nursery rhyme" I could just picture the whole scenario. This is a nurse rhyme for all ages. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
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October 13, 2021 at 1:49 PM
Thank you so very much my friend
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