Car Sick Nursery Rhyme

My cousin Suzy was feeling quite woozy as we drove along in the car Her sister Lizzy said “why are you dizzy we really aren’t going that far” Their brother Vic said, “She’s gonna be sick” as he rolled down the window real fast Mom seemed to worry, slowed down in a hurry till all of the other cars passed Suzy was green if you know what I mean as she hung her head outside the door Lizzy cried ooh at the foul smelling goo for she couldn’t quite take anymore Vic after while wore a devilish smile while proclaiming, “Man that was so cool” Mom shook her head as she quietly said “I can’t wait till they’re all back in school”

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Date: 3/22/2023 1:51:00 PM
You also have "Buster's ball" going in
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Date: 3/21/2023 2:18:00 AM
I found this beauty, I copied for the Nursery Rhyme Book hope you don't mine. Hugs Eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/22/2023 1:49:00 PM
Look at my blog my friend.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/21/2023 6:56:00 AM
Hi Eve. it is so nice to see you again. I don't mind at all. What is the Nursery Rhyme book?
Date: 10/16/2021 9:08:00 PM
I think that you have a 2020 'Dr. Seuss Revisited' bone in you there, Chris. I enjoy the rhymes and the touch of naughtiness. ~ Septuaginarian going on 8, gw
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Chris Green
Date: 10/19/2021 6:33:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend. I'm still hanging around 6 years old...see you in a bit. : )
Date: 10/14/2021 7:42:00 AM
Such a well penned funny nursery rhyme Chris... Congrats on your win... God bless... ~ Ani
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Chris Green
Date: 10/19/2021 6:33:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words
Date: 10/14/2021 2:31:00 AM
Well penned, and a fun treat to read. Much enjoyed.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/19/2021 6:32:00 AM
Thanks so much Scott
Date: 10/13/2021 12:14:00 PM
Very funny! My husband was on a road trip with the kids. My daughter felt sick, put her head out the window and oops went her glasses. Took them a bit to find them. For a while I used the term “losing your glasses” for getting sick. I don’t think my daughter found that funny so I stopped.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/13/2021 1:50:00 PM
That is a funny story for sure and I can understand why she might not have appreciated it. : ) Thanks so much Kim
Date: 10/12/2021 12:42:00 PM
...ARE WE THERE YET????
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Chris Green
Date: 10/13/2021 1:50:00 PM
Almost!!!
Date: 10/12/2021 12:15:00 PM
Whimsical and fun like a nursery rhyme should be. Moms love it most. Good job
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Chris Green
Date: 10/13/2021 1:49:00 PM
Thank you so much Karen
Date: 10/12/2021 10:10:00 AM
Wow!Chris, I enjoyed your "nursery rhyme" I could just picture the whole scenario. This is a nurse rhyme for all ages. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 10/13/2021 1:49:00 PM
Thank you so very much my friend
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