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Car crash

Smell the burning rubber. Hear the screeching tyre. Watch in awe as the wheels fly off and the chassis catches fire. Then avert your eyes. Say your au revoir. The casualties are packed in tight Limp inside the car.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 9/27/2016 1:27:00 AM
Wow, how awfully good ! Congratulations
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Date: 9/26/2016 9:53:00 PM
Congratulations, Lewis! ...Fran
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Date: 9/26/2016 7:06:00 PM
Lewis- very interesting poem here- I think it says a lot about how real car accidents really are...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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