Car Crash

Smell the burning rubber.
Hear the screeching tyre. 
Watch in awe as the wheels fly off 
and the chassis catches fire.
Then avert your eyes.
Say your au revoir.
The casualties are packed in tight
Limp inside the car.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Troutman Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 1:27 AM
Wow, how awfully good ! Congratulations
Grasso Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 9:53 PM
Congratulations, Lewis! ...Fran
Scars Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 7:06 PM
Lewis- very interesting poem here- I think it says a lot about how real car accidents really are...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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