Car Be Me Car Fast

Car Be Me Car Fast

Car be me car, not you car, car be fast, me be fast in car, me fast
Go left car go left. 
Car be fast go left all day
500 laps, car be fast, laps go fast
Me car go fast
Win cup with car be fast
Get milk, when car go circle fast, go left
Other determining factors in auto racing are
Quantum balance, stream line vehicular shape, and grace
Rotate tires for proportioned stops and maneuvering power
Due diligence, judicious use of space while racing
Decreased velocities at corners
There is no time for second place
No stop signs, by design, on racing days 
Only a subtle touch of gas and brakes 
A discerning mind to optimize the vehicles potential in this venture
Speed fuels the need for high adventure 
Surrounding the circular path as the masses gasp and scream
So comprehend, surmise the cutting edge, turn left
Eloquently traverse the course with an exotic flare
Settle smartly, land right there, in winner’s circle
Car be fast, me be fast, but me come in last

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/2/2014 11:45:00 PM
Lol, you should follow the car. What's up with you? Can't leave it behind definitely :)
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 9/3/2014 7:58:00 AM
Good morning Toquyen, It is good to hear from you. Thank you so much for commenting. "Car go fast." "Too fast." I'll have to buy a jet to catch it. It is just a simple poem with 2 identities and linguistics I was playing with. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Have a great day. Take care. Earl
Date: 9/2/2014 6:58:00 PM
Ha, oh that was a fun ride Earl! I love your unique style it always gets me :) I used to watch racing, but never thought of the dynamics, just the car be fast, car go, go, win. cool write my friend ;) xx
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Date: 9/2/2014 9:52:00 PM
Hi Casarah, Thank you so much. I tried to create 2 psychological images. Racers have a reputation for not being too bright so I played with that concept. I have no interest whatsoever in racing. I am happy that you enjoyed the little ride though. Take care. Earl
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