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Captured Moment Haloed

When the golden sun sets over a horizon 
Mirrors inside glittering with reflections 

Sparkling Underneath the realm of possibilities
Far away drifting oasis upon a cloud called nine

Where heaven holds the creation’s seat 
Kneeling before lashes fold 

Enthroned by your light breathing through clouds 
Beneath adoring rays crowned by the Aura of beauty

Copyright © Liam Mcdaid | Year Posted 2017

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Gary Bateman Date: 11/2/2017 12:46:00 PM Hello Liam Mate!! Sorry I missed this one. Best Congratulations are in order for POTD!! You say so much and say it very well in only four couplets. Outstanding Mate!! Cheers and Best, Gary Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 10/28/2017 5:09:00 PM 'Far away drifting oasis upon a cloud called nine' your poetry is always a treat to read Liam. You take the everyday and make it special! I loved this and see why it was deservedly honored with POTD. Congratulations! : ) Login to Reply

Michael Vacek Date: 10/27/2017 9:43:00 AM "Where heaven holds the creation’s seat" Forgive me, but I'm going to use your line with others. That is the best description I have heard in my life to describe the glorious moments of our East and West. In the context of the East, the words are equally powerful Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2017 3:59:00 AM - Sorry, a little late Liam ... but, congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/25/2017 1:31:00 PM Beautiful words Liam. Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 10/22/2017 10:32:00 PM Congratulations liam on your POTD honors with your beautifully written poem with scintillant imagery. Enjoyed! Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 10/22/2017 9:42:00 PM Beautiful , liam, congratulations on POTD ~`* Login to Reply

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 10/22/2017 8:36:00 PM Hi Liam!:)) A very huge congratulations on POTD! Very much deserved my dearest friend Liam. A very beautiful poem! Just awesome! I'm so very happy for you.Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Login to Reply

Edward Mccall Date: 10/22/2017 7:58:00 PM What a beautiful piece of poetry. congrats on POTD Login to Reply

Donna Loughman Date: 10/22/2017 10:11:00 AM Congratulations on POTD! Well deserved! Login to Reply

Sunlite Wanter Date: 10/22/2017 9:51:00 AM Beautiful imagery. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/22/2017 9:37:00 AM Back with congratulations :) Login to Reply

Charlie Smith Date: 10/22/2017 8:43:00 AM Lovely write Liam, congratulations for POTD honors... Login to Reply

Maria Williams Date: 10/22/2017 8:01:00 AM Congratulations on POTD Liam. Such beauty in your lines....Maria Login to Reply

Donna Loughman Date: 10/20/2017 9:58:00 PM Liam... brilliant imagery and strength..a gift of lustrous verse for the reader. Login to Reply

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 10/20/2017 9:55:00 PM Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Login to Reply

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/20/2017 6:36:00 PM Gorgeous penning Liam xomo Login to Reply