Captured Moment Haloed

When the golden sun sets over a horizon 
Mirrors inside glittering with reflections 

Sparkling Underneath the realm of possibilities
Far away drifting oasis upon a cloud called nine

Where heaven holds the creation’s seat 
Kneeling before lashes fold 

Enthroned by your light breathing through clouds 
Beneath adoring rays crowned by the Aura of beauty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Bateman Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 12:46 PM
Hello Liam Mate!! Sorry I missed this one. Best Congratulations are in order for POTD!! You say so much and say it very well in only four couplets. Outstanding Mate!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 5:09 PM
'Far away drifting oasis upon a cloud called nine' your poetry is always a treat to read Liam. You take the everyday and make it special! I loved this and see why it was deservedly honored with POTD. Congratulations! : )
Vacek Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 9:43 AM
"Where heaven holds the creation’s seat" Forgive me, but I'm going to use your line with others. That is the best description I have heard in my life to describe the glorious moments of our East and West. In the context of the East, the words are equally powerful
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 3:59 AM
- Sorry, a little late Liam ... but, congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 1:31 PM
Beautiful words Liam.
Ashley Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 10:32 PM
Congratulations liam on your POTD honors with your beautifully written poem with scintillant imagery. Enjoyed!
Roper Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 9:42 PM
Beautiful , liam, congratulations on POTD ~`*
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 8:36 PM
Hi Liam!:)) A very huge congratulations on POTD! Very much deserved my dearest friend Liam. A very beautiful poem! Just awesome! I'm so very happy for you.Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Mccall Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 7:58 PM
What a beautiful piece of poetry. congrats on POTD
Loughman Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 10:11 AM
Congratulations on POTD! Well deserved!
Wanter Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 9:51 AM
Beautiful imagery. Congratulations!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 9:37 AM
Back with congratulations :)
Smith Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 8:43 AM
Lovely write Liam, congratulations for POTD honors...
Williams Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 8:01 AM
Congratulations on POTD Liam. Such beauty in your lines....Maria
Loughman Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 9:58 PM
Liam... brilliant imagery and strength..a gift of lustrous verse for the reader.
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 9:55 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 6:36 PM
Gorgeous penning Liam xomo
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