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Captured Moment Haloed

When the golden sun sets over a horizon Mirrors inside glittering with reflections Sparkling Underneath the realm of possibilities Far away drifting oasis upon a cloud called nine Where heaven holds the creation’s seat Kneeling before lashes fold Enthroned by your light breathing through clouds Beneath adoring rays crowned by the Aura of beauty

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Gary Bateman

Date: 11/2/2017 12:46:00 PM

Hello Liam Mate!! Sorry I missed this one. Best Congratulations are in order for POTD!! You say so much and say it very well in only four couplets. Outstanding Mate!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/28/2017 5:09:00 PM

'Far away drifting oasis upon a cloud called nine' your poetry is always a treat to read Liam. You take the everyday and make it special! I loved this and see why it was deservedly honored with POTD. Congratulations! : )

Michael Vacek

Date: 10/27/2017 9:43:00 AM

"Where heaven holds the creation’s seat" Forgive me, but I'm going to use your line with others. That is the best description I have heard in my life to describe the glorious moments of our East and West. In the context of the East, the words are equally powerful

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2017 3:59:00 AM

- Sorry, a little late Liam ... but, congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/25/2017 1:31:00 PM

Beautiful words Liam.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/22/2017 10:32:00 PM

Congratulations liam on your POTD honors with your beautifully written poem with scintillant imagery. Enjoyed!

Eve Roper

Date: 10/22/2017 9:42:00 PM

Beautiful , liam, congratulations on POTD ~`*

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/22/2017 8:36:00 PM

Hi Liam!:)) A very huge congratulations on POTD! Very much deserved my dearest friend Liam. A very beautiful poem! Just awesome! I'm so very happy for you.Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Edward Mccall

Date: 10/22/2017 7:58:00 PM

What a beautiful piece of poetry. congrats on POTD

Donna Loughman

Date: 10/22/2017 10:11:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD! Well deserved!

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 10/22/2017 9:51:00 AM

Beautiful imagery. Congratulations!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 10/22/2017 9:37:00 AM

Back with congratulations :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/22/2017 8:43:00 AM

Lovely write Liam, congratulations for POTD honors...

Maria Williams

Date: 10/22/2017 8:01:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD Liam. Such beauty in your lines....Maria

Donna Loughman

Date: 10/20/2017 9:58:00 PM

Liam... brilliant imagery and strength..a gift of lustrous verse for the reader.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/20/2017 9:55:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 10/20/2017 6:36:00 PM

Gorgeous penning Liam xomo