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By the turquoise waters edge camping in the somnolent breeze I sit writing on the shore; trees whispering... A rustling of leaves and I look up to view, tiny fawn; soon Mama comes into view; eyes meeting mine, stalled... She sees no weapon, only me, my journal and a pen carefully watches, standing there and I don’t move. A nose-nudge to her offspring and both leap back into the trees; I resume my writing... finish, turn to see... Mama behind me, just watching; in my mind I hear a voice... face says, “I know you won’t harm us, I like you too”.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/18/2019 8:01:00 PM
Really enjoyed your creativity, M.L.. It captured me, and momentarily i felt as if I was there.. So wonderful!! Blessings to you, my friend..
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/20/2019 5:58:00 PM
Thanks Robertina, I am glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 4/23/2019 4:41:00 PM
Since this is my power animal, of course, this went to my fav list.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/24/2019 1:22:00 PM
Good, I am glad that I could be of service in filling your "fav" list. Blessings to you and your power animal!
Date: 4/22/2019 5:27:00 AM
How magnificent a scene! Lucky you" Panagiota
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/22/2019 2:27:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 4/20/2019 1:58:00 PM
A beautiful , sweet poem. I love it and felt like I was there :)
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/20/2019 2:07:00 PM
Good, that's how it should be; thank you.

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