Captured Moment

By the turquoise waters edge camping in the somnolent breeze I sit writing on the shore; trees whispering... A rustling of leaves and I look up to view, tiny fawn; soon Mama comes into view; eyes meeting mine, stalled... She sees no weapon, only me, my journal and a pen carefully watches, standing there and I don’t move. A nose-nudge to her offspring and both leap back into the trees; I resume my writing... finish, turn to see... Mama behind me, just watching; in my mind I hear a voice... face says, “I know you won’t harm us, I like you too”.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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B. Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 8:01 PM
Really enjoyed your creativity, M.L.. It captured me, and momentarily i felt as if I was there.. So wonderful!! Blessings to you, my friend..
Kiser Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 5:58 PM
Thanks Robertina, I am glad you enjoyed it.
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April 23, 2019 at 4:41 PM
Since this is my power animal, of course, this went to my fav list.
Kiser Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 1:22 PM
Good, I am glad that I could be of service in filling your "fav" list. Blessings to you and your power animal!
Romios Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 5:27 AM
How magnificent a scene! Lucky you" Panagiota
Kiser Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 2:27 PM
Thank you.
Sands Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 1:58 PM
A beautiful , sweet poem. I love it and felt like I was there :)
Kiser Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 2:07 PM
Good, that's how it should be; thank you.
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