Captured Hearts

When I open my eyes
I want to see you face,
When I close my eyes
I want to dream of you,

It may sound insane
It may sound obsessive
It may just be 
That you captured my heart, 

The air that I breathe
Seems to emulate you 
The words from your lips
Seems to spew passion 
Just for me…

The question remain,
A constant refrain,
Please remain and 
let me capture yours too…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/23/2010 6:26:00 AM
Well I hope he lets you capture his heart Wilma! He should you know!! He's blind not to-- ok ok I am going to be nice now...:) -- nikko :)
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Date: 7/20/2010 9:07:00 PM
Sweet and romantic sentiments Miss Fickle and and luv your new name .. its wonderfully intriguing.. enjoyed this creativity tonight.. with luv..
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Date: 7/20/2010 7:08:00 AM
I really like this one. Are you Wilma then ?? I think that is what I heard. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/19/2010 8:38:00 AM
Lovely and sweet write, Wilma! And thank you for commenting "Silence". Yo have asked me about the time difference. But where are you living? I am living in the most southeasterly town of Germany and only a mile from the Czech Republic and Poland. Cross my fingers that you can sleep nicely and won't need my remedy (hahaha!!!). Al the best!...Gert
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Date: 7/19/2010 7:39:00 AM
Sweet and romantic write..makes e warm and smile...Michael
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