Captured

Eyes, meet : Auras meld, Hearts entwine

        Inspired by "SweetHeart" Linda-Marie's Contest "First Love"
                                       TOO LATE
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 28, 2010 at 10:55 AM
i am here to wish you double luck in the contest, knowing you captured my attention. nice to all your comments. i am trying a new write . maybe not so mischief, until the end. A little bit of my name until BILLY THE KIDSTER , STOPS PRETENDING TO BE ME ..P.D.
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April 27, 2010 at 11:47 AM
Hi my darling silent beau.. and yes my contest close rather quickly so just keep looking .. I am on my 5th one to date and this "beauty" Epigram definitely would have ranked high on the list... its my kinda "First Love" poem... hope u are feeling better now and wish I could help u type your poems and post them to help out... a definite prize winner .. luv form your forever "Sweetheart"
Mehta Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 9:07 PM
All the same thnkas for sharing. I enjoyed it
A   Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 6:52 PM
Good luck in the contest..p.d.
Green Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 6:51 PM
I like this one.
Culverhouse Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 6:06 PM
too late--they go by fast these days!! lol
Kendrick Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 5:35 PM
Interesting memories of first love..Keep the creative pen flowing.Sara
Chachere Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 5:34 PM
even so, i also pray that you will be happy again, the day when you entwine with the love that melts your heart. .~sister spirit Lynn Always
Chachere Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 5:34 PM
This sounds really sweet.though i am not surprised you would write something so heart warming, enough to melt anyone's heart. Auras, such a beautiful word. are you portraying the sensation you felt the moment you met Lenore?if so, it's beautiful.so in love, only with few words.it would be on my list.good luck.i love you always spirit brother,& i my wishes are that your health mends.
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