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Captivity

Part 4 of my "Image" series.. Treacherous, back stabbing, a troubled changeling. no host, pure demoniacal. Mit Wobet, begins his vicious cycle. Monica Mcmichael, high spirited, humble. She stumbles upon this pretty man, smooth, well educated with a staff in his hand. The foundation was set, for Mr. Mit Wobet. Mysteriously grand, attentive to his commands. lost within a series of dreams. She seems to be free But limited within these dreams. soon she will realize, soon she will scream, comatose, lifeless now part of Mit Wobets' supremely extreme regime. abduction into this production by Mit Wobet. Sexually induced seduction, chemically explosive mental eruption. Held captive, spent, another mindless, soulless pet. All she does is wonder why. why was she chosen? who is this guy? Why? And what is the significance of that awful crimson tie? Come back for the conclusion "Random Thoughts *31* Double Acrostic to Rictameter..... Jared Pickett 11/9/09 Asavvy1

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Date: 12/17/2009 10:19:00 AM
A wonderful piece you have penned here Jared....captivated by the imagery with the mysteriousness qualities which makes the mind wonder what's going to happen...magnificent job! Thanks so much for sharing. Have a splendid day~Mary
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Date: 12/9/2009 9:36:00 AM
Nice style here, Enjoyed the read and flow... Well Done Son....Dad
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Date: 11/12/2009 11:35:00 AM
Jared.. I was captive reading this excellent write... bravo my friend.. mysterious, interesting, intriguing, and seductive as well... good job... keep at it.. thankxxx for your comments on my Captivity poem also... much appreciated...luv Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart" do u have a blog yet? just posted mine
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Date: 11/10/2009 8:52:00 PM
Mysterious and Seducing..excellent work again-Charma
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Date: 11/10/2009 12:55:00 AM
Jared thank you for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/9/2009 4:11:00 PM
Different work here. Keep writing. Thanks for the comments on my poems. Sara
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