Captivity

Part 4 of my "Image" series..


Treacherous, back stabbing,
a troubled changeling.
no host, pure demoniacal.
Mit Wobet,
begins his vicious cycle.

Monica Mcmichael,
high spirited, 
humble.
She stumbles upon
this pretty man,
smooth, well educated
with a staff in his hand.

                                               The foundation was set,
                                                   for Mr. Mit Wobet.
Mysteriously grand,
attentive to his commands.

                                          lost within a series of dreams.
                                               She seems to be free
                                                            But
                                           limited within these dreams.

soon she will realize, 
soon she will scream,
comatose, lifeless
now part of Mit Wobets'
supremely extreme regime.

abduction into this production by
Mit Wobet.
Sexually induced seduction,
chemically explosive mental eruption.
Held captive,
spent,
another mindless, 
soulless pet.

All she does is wonder why.
why was she chosen?
who is this guy?
Why?
And what is the significance
of that awful crimson tie?

Come back for the conclusion "Random Thoughts *31* Double Acrostic to Rictameter.....

Jared Pickett
11/9/09
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Meade Stephenson Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 10:19 AM
A wonderful piece you have penned here Jared....captivated by the imagery with the mysteriousness qualities which makes the mind wonder what's going to happen...magnificent job! Thanks so much for sharing. Have a splendid day~Mary
Pickett Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 9:36 AM
Nice style here, Enjoyed the read and flow... Well Done Son....Dad
Sweetheart Avatar
November 12, 2009 at 11:35 AM
Jared.. I was captive reading this excellent write... bravo my friend.. mysterious, interesting, intriguing, and seductive as well... good job... keep at it.. thankxxx for your comments on my Captivity poem also... much appreciated...luv Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart" do u have a blog yet? just posted mine
Chircop Avatar
November 10, 2009 at 8:52 PM
Mysterious and Seducing..excellent work again-Charma
Strand Avatar
November 10, 2009 at 12:55 AM
Jared thank you for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian
Kendrick Avatar
November 9, 2009 at 4:11 PM
Different work here. Keep writing. Thanks for the comments on my poems. Sara
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