Notes About The Poem

Heavens cloud I call it 

7  syllables by 2 heavens number 

followed by 9 syllables cloud 

three trinity crossroads 

 

Captivating

looking into love your eyes 
there's nowhere left in this world 
I would rather be at this minute 

Time stands still 

Straying into a dream gem
bringing joy sighs to the heart
held captivated in a moment 

Whispering 

Happiness kisses your soul
can I be the light inside 
your dark spaces dancing brightly night 

One spirit 

Silver shadows tangoing 
together holding hands deep 
footprints remain beautiful with you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Andresen Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 5:27 AM
- Deep love in these lines, Liam - It is beautiful !!! - (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 4:26 PM
Hi Liam!This is a most beautiful,romantic,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written!Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden pen.I just love it!Another very beautiful,romantic,dreamy, most enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautiful n' sweet!Great!Just superb!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just perfect!Excellent!Very delightful imagery!I love your poetry style in all too.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything.Always keeping you in my prayers,Liam.Keep your Faith!Please take good care of yourself always.Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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