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Here her eyes are as sapphire as blue can be In her vision she sees, all there is to witness She is reassuring and ageless And at times she is green with envy She is vast and then see can be empty She is volatile and at times furious Her body lines are mysterious But oh she is beautiful when the sun aluminates on her shoulder She is calm when she’s at rests on a bolder She is playful and she’ll put you through the test She’ll out live you, as you grow older She has various peaks and she roars when she speaks Never underestimate her strength for she’ll destroy you and repent She may take over the forbidden land with a rush from her clever hands She has been around since the beginning of mankind She is our ocean, she is confined

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/16/2008 1:41:00 PM
Very visual and excellent images. Good one. Regards Heidie
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Date: 8/16/2008 3:11:00 AM
Oh, I like this one - great use of personification, well done! Kristin
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Date: 8/16/2008 12:29:00 AM
Your poetrycaptures the reader drawing into your writing. Nice one Laura.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 8/15/2008 1:34:00 PM
Awesome write! I was 'captivated' and could not wait to get to the end of the poem! Wonderful use of personifcation! Love, Shar
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Date: 8/15/2008 12:06:00 PM
a very beautiful warm, tender poem. enjoyed reading this.
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