Captivated In Time

I'm captivated, A shadow in life's mirror, Time will not sit still, Trickling by like a brook, Pouring over me in torrents. (c) 2015 PJ Bayliss

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Date: 1/7/2016 5:41:00 PM
wow,, i like the torrent pull. SKAT
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