Captain's Last Meal

One piece of bread,
 I dip it in the salty soup
And bring it to my mouth
Eat I say to myself
Eat
For those who jumped out of the ship
One more piece in the soup
Eat for those who did not
A bite of the sweet corn
For my wife
And son
Who will wait forever
For a dead captain
To come home
One little sip of the soup
And There is water till my knee.
Unhurried and steady
The sea gives me time 
to finish my meal
I take the last sip of the soup
As my ship sinks
With the dead crew
And a vain captain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/5/2016 1:04:00 AM
I thought I might pop round and pay my regards, Adri. Hope everything is fine with you. All my very best! :) john P.s Fantastic little poem - An obvious seven!
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Date: 5/22/2016 11:22:00 PM
Liked this a lot. Rather give up everything than admit he's wrong.
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Date: 5/22/2016 11:23:00 PM
Hope I'll see more from you.
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