Captain Took My Toy

Hey!
That Was Mine!

I Was Trying To
Compare It To
Whatever WASN'T:

***ARTIFICIAL!!!***

Now You've Ruined
All My Toys...

What A Bad Boy.

Bumber.

('spelling under-dog.')

-Gray Squirrel

10-01-2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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October 2, 2026 at 3:00 AM
This compact free-verse piece has the snap and indignation of a miniature dramatic monologue. Its emphatic capitalization, broken phrasing, and sudden “ARTIFICIAL!!!” create a wonderfully comic, accusatory voice—while “Bumber” and the parenthetical “spelling under-dog” give it a sly, vulnerable charm.
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October 2, 2026 at 9:58 AM
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