Captain Greenzone's Flying Pride Brigade

You've had your chance
 But you've made a mess of things
Now sit back down.

We can see you through
 The incompetent ones
You've placed before us.

Parrots are not impressive.

We surrendered our culture 
  Rooted deep in our ground.
Watched in muted horror
 As you pushed us aside
And claimed our treasures for yourself.

Now we only ask you watch us starve outside your walls
  Of pride,
So you can be absolutely certain
  This brutal exercise was worth it to you
That it all worked out in the end...

But nothing ends, Captain. Nothing ever ends.

Our children will fight back
 And put you and your cronies in your place,
Where you were lost
 And crossed all the lines you shouldn't have crossed.
 
Captain Greenzone, your ship has sailed
 Don't fight the tide, you can't prevail
Captain Greenzone,  it's time to leave
 Let leaders come from those who grieve.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/25/2009 10:07:00 PM
Sounds like group to me ... LOL ... what a wonderful write !!
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Date: 5/23/2009 4:49:00 PM
Well written and I loved the hole story. It urges you from time to time into some completion. Also it warns you of enemies and other things. Enjoyed it alot. My opinion.
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Date: 5/22/2009 6:47:00 AM
Mail for my witty friend!
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Date: 5/21/2009 8:57:00 PM
Pride builds walls that keep love and friendship out, Yoni. Very intriguing title in this compelling poem. I'd like to give "Captain Greenzone" a piece of my mind. Love, Carolyn (And thanks for playing tag with us! HG just posted a poem that mentions the circle of tags posted here.)
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