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Captain Gilgamesh Aloysius Willikers

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Poetic Form: Dramatic Verse
Inspired: 2024 June 12
Image: Gilgamesh by villains.wiki
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Welcome! I am Captain G. Willikers. Really? Truly? That be your name. Oh no, Silly Billy, hid'n d'G all the same. O let' me guess, O let' me guess. What could d'G be.. Guess away, guess away it's your time it's your cruise but keep away, keep away for I've no interest in your clues but how will I know the truth if you're going to be uncouth okay, it's not easy, rarely heard since the days the flood dried the Earth What flood? The Great Flood! Which one? The only one! Are you talkin' biblical? Not at all being comical. Oh, there's a GEE of history, So Gilgamesh your name to be. History, your cup of tea? I drink coffee with my tea ... Gilgamesh Aloysius Willikers, at your service! Tomimbum Winn Shogun -- visitors makes you nervous? Your name sounds like, 'with shotgun' --am I right? Bookends my weekends, weakened by my shootin's. T: Dinner. G: Sixer. T: Never ate with a god, ever. G: Nor I, so affairs a Black Tie? T: A god's not good enough for a White Dinner Jacket? G: Only the hood--cleaners returned--the rest, they'll pack it. T: What? G: Got ya! T: I'm lookin' forward to a very good time! G: Of lookin' backward to once upon a time ...

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Date: 6/13/2024 3:20:00 AM
Hi Hilo, you must have researched extensively on this personage. I know nothing about him. Yet I found your poem interesting.
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Date: 6/13/2024 4:29:00 AM
Working on Sotto's 'E' contest, I came across this 'Epic of Gilgamesh' and after a short read of it--led thusly--now back to Sotto, Thank you, Victor.
Date: 6/12/2024 10:19:00 PM
Wonderful enjoyable verse, my friend.
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Date: 6/13/2024 2:49:00 AM
I thought Nursery Rhyme as the next best, thanks, Eve, Aloha

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