Capricorn Concoction . . .

C arefree to an extent, 
A mbitious and analitical
P retty darned straightforeward
R arely very neatly coiffed
I ce cream sundaes are my favourite
C rafty and creative - okay, maybe a tad bit then!
O pen and understanding, to lend an ear
R emotely direction impaired, but do not fear
N autically challenged, do not even go there!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Anderson Avatar
March 15, 2009 at 3:48 AM
God bless the capricorns. luv your work
Winter Avatar
March 7, 2009 at 10:37 AM
Your 4th line made me laugh and I too loved the very last line! Well done and good luck! Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
March 7, 2009 at 9:46 AM
Like Chris said...that last line is a gem!! ~ Good luck in the contest !!! ~ Carrie
Higgins Avatar
March 7, 2009 at 5:13 AM
LOL..love the last line..I think this is a winner..best wishes and well done.
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