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Cap'N Crunch, Cereal Filler

When I was single and living alone Cereal curbed my tummy’s moans Eating Cap'n Crunch Breakfast, dinner, and lunch Was a cooking hookey I honed! 10/4/11 Received 2nd place in "Cereal Limerick" contest

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Jack Horne

Date: 10/27/2011 8:57:00 AM

LOL, at least you didn't serve it up for your family too : ) Thanks, Susan - loved the contest

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/13/2011 9:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Favorite Cereal" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/9/2011 9:49:00 PM

Congrats Susan on an outstanding win with this creative write on the Cap'n and his cereal luv..

John Freeman

Date: 10/9/2011 12:13:00 PM

Susan, Cool poem. Congrats on your worthy Limerick. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/9/2011 4:13:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D., Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2011 1:27:00 AM

Yours is terrific, Susan!! Congrats on your great win. Luv, Andrea ps. I've only got half an hour left to cruise through poems. Wish me luck.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/9/2011 12:20:00 AM

DEAR ,Susan , CONGRATULATIONS! ;-) THANKS FOR SUPPORTING MY CONTEST, WITH YOUR FUNNY cereal LIMERICK,..ALWAYS,..P.D.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/6/2011 3:50:00 PM

Thank goodness then for good 'ol Cap'n Crunch! :D Wish you the best in the contest, Susan :) & sending you soupmail in a bit :D

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/6/2011 3:20:00 PM

LOL I live alone and keep an ample stack of Cheerios boxes for just this reason. Very funny limerick, Susan. Best wishes in the cereal contest. Love, Carolyn

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/5/2011 10:44:00 PM

What a awesome write Susan! I really enjoyed reading this poem! Outstanding work!!